Sunday, 16 September 2012

HARM. A mecha SF story about future warfare is free from 2012 Sept 16 to Sept 20.

HARM. A hard SF story about future warfare between giant mechs to save the Earth from invaders.  Free from Sept 16, 2012 to Sept 20, 2012  to celebrate the release of Raid on Kahamba, the next story in the Exocrisis Blue universe.

Amazon USA / Canada   http://www.amazon.com/dp/B007X65FYA
Amazon UK   http://www.amazon.co.uk/HARM-ebook/dp/B007X65FYA


"A GOOD READ.  Stand alone short set in a world where humanity is being invaded by aliens with superior weaponry. Reverse engineering enables mankind to create new tech... HARM."




Tuesday, 11 September 2012

Tales From A Yellow Star Free from Sept 11, 2012 to Sept 15, 2012

The Free promo campaign for my ebooks is now live!  Right now Tales From A Yellow Star is free  from Sept 11, 2012 to Sept 15, 2012!  Stay tuned for more upcoming freebies.

"Big Bang For Your Buck ...ideal for a science-fiction reader. More please, Mr. Lok."  A. Chow at Amazon.com
"Good exciting short sci-fi stories ...Good descriptions, believable characters and understandable plot, with credible technology. I enjoyed this."  Chopper at Amazon.co.uk


Amazon USA / Canada http://www.amazon.com/Tales-From-Yellow-Star-ebook/dp/B007HHQGKM
Amazon UK   http://www.amazon.co.uk/Tales-From-Yellow-Star-ebook/dp/B007HHQGKM

Quick Status
I'm running a low key campaign and I'm getting decent downloads.  Over 150 in the last day and a half.  Again, thank you to anyone who has downloaded it.  It is ranking about 40 to 50 in the free SF download list so I'm pretty happy.  If you enjoy it and have a chance, leave me some feedback or a quick review on Amazon if you.

Saturday, 8 September 2012

Raid on Kahamba Release / Limited Time Free Book Promo

Good day, Everyone!
Raid on Kahamba is undergoing final edits and I hope to have it up in the Amazon store sometime during the week of September 10-16, 2012.  I hope people enjoy this science fiction action story with mecha combat.  I would love to hear comments back from mecha fans or anyone who just enjoyed the story.  I've tried to create a believable world and am introducing key elements that will figure in the the Exocrisis Blue series which is the next thing I'll be writing up.

Now onto the other news.  Amazon allows authors to put their works up for free every so often to promote their books if they are part of the KDP program.  Here is the free book promo schedule I'll be setting up on Amazon.
  • Free from Sept 11, 2012 to Sept 15, 2012  Tales From A Yellow Star  
  • Free from Sept 16, 2012 to Sept 20, 2012  HARM  (first Exocrisis story)
  • Free from Sept 19, 2012 to Sept 23, 2012  Raid on Kahamba (second Exocrisis story)
Hit the link below to see the direct links to the Kindle store.
My Ebook Publications

If you manage to snag it for free, please leave some comments here on the blog or an Amazon review.  I have a few reviews, but would appreciate more.

Above Photo credit: liza31337 / Flickr



Monday, 13 August 2012

Exocrisis Blue: Raid on Kahamba Cover Art

Hi everyone!

The next story set in the Exocrisis Blue universe is on schedule for a mid-September 2012 release.  I'm glad to report that the first draft is about 80% complete with everything outlined to the end.  It will be a novella length story that is double the length of, HARM, the first story.  This story explains more of the back story for Exocrisis Blue and takes place 10 years after HARM.  It is not a sequel to the first story even though there are recurring characters and is completely self-contained.  If you like mecha action and commando raids then stay tuned for more updates!

I've even been working on the cover art which will look like this.  The cover is in the same style as the first cover for HARM and would look nice on anyones electronic bookshelf.

Sunday, 29 July 2012

All of Earth's Water and Our Puny Planet Vs. A Solar Flare

Earth Vs. Solar Flare
Seems like there's news all the time right now about the sun.  A few news books and articles have appeared about the sun, our source of energy for life.  When you compare the size of a solar flare to our puny planet, you realize just how powerful a flare is.  A solar flare is like easily a hundred times larger than the earth.  Not too many scifi spaceships or technologies capable of take that kind of damage.


There is a good article here and it has a great graphic.
http://www.universetoday.com/96465/guest-post-our-explosive-sun/
The article's author also just published a book about the sun and an excerpt can be found here.
http://www.scientificamerican.com/article.cfm?id=hottest-stars-extreme-cosmos

All of Earth's Water
For some reason it also reminded me about this other infographic about all of the water on earth shown as a sphere.  Sure doesn't seem like very much water is out there when you see the graphic.  When you see images like these, it does makes you realize how small you are.
Big blue sphere is all the water on Earth!
The image above is courtesy of the USGS and there is a very informative article about the graphic here.
http://ga.water.usgs.gov/edu/2010/gallery/global-water-volume.html





Monday, 16 July 2012

Moon Dust and Solar Flares - Science News

I recently ran across a couple of very interesting news articles.  One from NASA and another from a research group examining the toxicity of lunar dust.
Solar Flare Coronal Mass Ejection / NASA

We've entered a high cycle for solar activity and the photos of solar flares and the movies are amazing to see.  Possible disruption of your electronic devices - maybe.  Nothing like toasted electronics everywhere if a big enough flare pops up.
http://www.nasa.gov/mission_pages/sunearth/news/News071212-X1.4flare.html

I also never realized how much of a problem lunar dust is.  The particles are just deadly to humans.  These dust particles are razor sharp as they have never been weathered and they are like inhaling asbestos or other really sharp glassy silicates.  They're abrasive to the skin and eyes and bad for the lungs.  Wow.  Talk about needing to clean off the old spacesuit.  Decontamination bath time and major scrubbing and vacuuming.
http://www.universetoday.com/96208/the-moon-is-toxic/

Sunday, 24 June 2012

Exocrisis Blue - After the Alien War

Summer time!  The sun is shining, the birds are singing, and I'm painting the front step.   I'm also writing but this is the worst time of year to be productive as you have to enjoy the 2 whole months of summer weather in Canada before it snows again.  Okay, I exaggerate a bit, but it feels that way some years.

Work on Raid on Kahamba continues and I'm still aiming for that end of August / September time frame to get the next installment of Excocrisis out.  Today, I'm going to show a front and side concept drawing of the HARM unit and talk a little about the world of Exocrisis Blue.

The actual mecha design started out as an abstract drawing of the robot's head for the cover of HARM.  I then thought, what would it take to make it into an actual robot.  This drawing was for the original HARM unit X-14, and the mecha design will have become more streamlined and armoured since then.  For Raid on Kahamba, the HARM unit involved will be a second generation model that will incorporate elements of the prototype, but it will be different.  Each set of countries will also have their own types of HARM units, all based off the original prototypes, but taken in sometimes vastly different directions.

So what is the world of Exocrisis Blue like ten years after the story HARM takes place?  Here is a little background for the upcoming story.

Post-War Years
Ten years after AA  (After Armageddon or After Arrival).
  • European Union is now lead by France as the Germany was greatly devastated by the war.  A great deal of rebuilding has happened.
  • Brazil – or the Brazilian Empire.  It rules South America except for neutral Chile. Brazil has a Guyana Space Base that was captured from the European Union and works with them for space launches.
  • The former eastern United States of America – also calls itself the True United States. A very conservative Christian religious democracy originally started in the power vacuum at the end of the Alien War.
  • China has fractured into a southern block which is now the PRC, and multiple northern factions.
  • The former western United States is now Pacifica and represents the ideals closest to the nation from which it originated.
  • Japan is once again an economic powerhouse with close ties to Canada and Pacifica.  Japan has had brush fire wars with the PRC even though it has simmered down.  They support the northern Chinese factions.
  • The Pan-African Alliance which is lead out of South Africa.  This block is allied with the PRC which provided aid to the African continent.
  • Australia is independent along with New Zealand.
  • India and Pakistan have set aside differences to be their own power bloc with ties to the Middle East, Russian Federation, and PRC / Northern Chinese.
  • The middle east, the -stan countries, Iran, Iraq all have ties to the Russian Federation.

That's all for now.  Stay tuned.



Saturday, 9 June 2012

Science Fiction and the Test of Time

Ever wonder if a novel or story you have read will still be relevant in a hundred years?  What makes something good enough that it would still matter or be considered a classic?  I was reading an anthology of classic sci fi from the early to mid-20th century called The World Turned Upside Down from Baen Books.  Some of the stories were still really good.  Most were entertaining, but some were really dated and a bit of a struggle to get through.  Some of these stories are sixty to seventy years old and they show their age.

Still, you need a good story first or none of this discussion really matters anyhow.

Bookshelf / Peter Lok
You can actually read it free here from the Fifth Imperium website which hosts some CDs that were made available with select hardcover books and the books are redistributable under the license (pretty amazing actually).  It is actually a great way to get some good sci fi for free (but there is a lot of SF in it from David Weber, David Drake, John Ringo, and many more).  You can read it online or download it in an ebook format at the link below. http://baencd.thefifthimperium.com/23-TheEasternFrontCD/1635TheEasternFrontCD/The%20World%20Turned%20Upside%20Down/index.htm  Just remember to support these authors and buy a book from them for trying this marketing approach.

I have not devoted years of my life to thinking about this topic, but I have a couple of ideas about what makes something last.  Science fiction, which is what I write, is probably the hardest genre of fiction as it dates badly based on the technology envisioned or what people expect social norms to be.  There is a double whammy when the social behavior is predicated on the technology.  In this sense, a science fiction author is being a futurist and you know how well futurists have generally predicted the future.  It isn't a stellar track record even ten years into the future.

Anyhow, here are a just a few cultural and technology issues I noticed from the reading the short stories and analyzing them just a little bit.
  1. The early SF writers wrote for guys and treated women fairly badly.  The writing isn't realistic around women.  It reflects the cultural attitudes of the time too so I may be being too harsh - but maybe not.
  2. No internet or modern computers.  Our current level of technology with instantaneous communication, always on computing, personal computing devices, cell phones, mass storage, mass communication of a thousand TV channels, etc., were probably inconceivable. One story with a super-duper computer (can't say anymore or I'll ruin the story) was really good despite a bad start (too many wires) did withstand the test of time though.
  3. Spaceships with manual targeting - good space opera, but lousy science.  
  4. Spaceships with simple computing machines.  HAL 9000s are probably what type of super computer intelligence that should exist.
  5. What do you call a visual display device? Viewer, CRT, TV, visual display, etc.  Wrong term makes it sound pretty bad or jarring to suspension of disbelief.
  6. Making a wrong prediction.  One story was developed before mass air travel was economically feasible so people drove down 12 lane freeways with jet powered cars.  Very cool story, but so wrong.
I have to emphasize I did enjoy reading the stories, but often it was from a historical viewpoint.  So I have a few rules of thumb to keep writing from aging badly. Remember, you need a good story first, then these item help its longevity.
  1. Have a narrow focus in the story.  Keep it detailed right around the core story with the protagonists, but have it become more general with other events.  Don't build a big expansive detailed world and have it dated when things change in the real world that indicate it isn't possible.  Don't describe a societal norm (unless you need to) that you "figured would happen" based on your extrapolation.  
  2. The Windup Girl is an example of complex world building for the Calorie Wars and all of the labour powered devices via super springs.  I enjoyed reading the novel for the story and characters but could not appreciate the world building as it has a zero probability scenario of arrival without major warfare breaking out with nukes.  On the other hand a piece of writing like Germline which is a bit similar to The Windup Girl with the genetically engineered clone soldiers vs windup bio-organisms worked far better for me even if the military stuff was only okay. 
    This situation is probably because Germline focused on only a small portion of the world and only the military, rather than the vast complex world of the Calorie Wars.  I know I'm being picky, but I don't really want a set piece just because someone thought it was cool and it had to be that way - world building is hard work and logical.  Look to Jack Vance for world building tips - make it alien and not of Earth if you want to get away with detailed world building.  Use another world, another galaxy, another time, another species to your advantage.
  3. Be general in the descriptions of technology and push the technology one step further.  Communicators are in your head not in your pocket.  Don't use TVs, use holographic displays or retina displays right on your retina, etc.  What are you going to call your technology?  A brand name might work or a general description - but be careful as the word CRT or TV may not exist in 50 years except to indicate you are OLD. Will the Internet still be called the Internet in 50 years?
  4. Use contemporary characters and extraordinary events to tell stories that are well grounded and believable in the present or past.  This way you are not extrapolating a societal norm that could become wrong.  This is taking the easy way out from setting something in the future, but it is safer.
  5. Use a non-technical character to describe the story.  You don't get bogged down in technical details and the language is more general and readable in the present and probably the future.
Finally, H.G. Wells wrote The War of the Worlds in 1898 and it has aged really well.  He pretty much followed all of these rules.
  1.  A journalist - nice generic character who describes action from experiencing it. He isn't the general or the infantryman fighting directly.
  2. Set in 1898 contemporary London and England. World building is minimal, but he doesn't describe the world in great detail - it is just there and we use our interpretations of a coal powered industrial England to fill in the gaps where necessary.
  3. The aliens arrive by being launched from cannons on Mars - not so good, but they could have been rockets or mass drivers.
  4. The alien war machines and weapons.  Still cool today and we can just do the robotics in the 21st century.  Heat rays (nice generic description) are lasers!  He extrapolated poison gas too and used it on a scale that didn't happen till WW1.
  5. Story is tight - basically around the central character.  Too many characters (like modern novels) mean too many holes as the world you must build in detail gets bigger and bigger.
I hoped everyone enjoyed this and it is mainly food for thought. So thanks for reading!

Monday, 4 June 2012

Raid on Kahamba - A Story From Exocrisis Blue

I've been busy with work, blogging for Tokyo Excess, and planning out the world of Exocrisis Blue.  Usually in this order.  Have no fear though, work continues in utmost secrecy.  While I have good notes for Exocrisis, I realized there was a need to keep adding more background material as story points came up.  I also needed to keep things orderly at the same time as I'm covering a 16 year stretch of history before the main story of Exocrisis Blue.
Front View concept drawing of a HARM unit.

So, I'm letting fans of the first story Exocrisis Blue story, HARM, know that I have started writing another standalone story that takes place about 10 years after HARM and 6 years before Exocrisis Blue.  This story will give some details about the end of the Alien War and build on some critical key elements that will be central to Exocrisis Blue. Everyone's favourite HARM pilot, Joshua Scott, will be back as a central character.

This is a story is tentatively titled RAID, and is about a mission to snatch something important from a research facility located at an old mining facility in Africa.  I'm aiming to have the story done in the August to September time frame of 2012.  The story will feature advanced HARM units, international intrigue, commandos, and more.

And thanks to all the people who bought HARM.  It certainly helps in the morale department.

Stay tuned!

One more thing, do any mecha fans out there know of any good places I can post or publicize my Exocrisis / HARM stories.  There are many forums, but not many for something that isn't Gundam or for authors to talk about their books/stories.  Let me know in the replies if you can help out. Thanks again.


Friday, 4 May 2012

HARM - The Kindle Free Promo Update

Successful Promo

The promo is now over.  Managed to give away just over 300 copies! 


Grab your copy today from Amazon.com or for your local country version of it if they support ebooks.
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B007X65FYA

May 6
Last day for the free promo. Giving away stuff is truly hard.  Sales are tapering off and I do suspect that not being categorized in SF hurt the longer term for cross-sales where a buyer buys one sci fi book and is shown a list of other books that were bought in conjunction (basically Amazon word of mouth).  Still, the book is ranked #33 in Science Fiction Adventure, #75 in Science Fiction with a free rank of 1696.  

May 5
It's 10 AM and the day is starting well.  The problem with the missing science fiction category has mysteriously resolved itself - customer support hasn't contacted me yet, but I'm still way happier than before.  It just might take 24 to 36 hours for the system to recategorize the book.  I'd still like to get a couple of promo days back (you only have 5 every 4 months and part of Kindle Select).  HARM is now #28 in SF and rising through the ranks again to 1380. My thanks to anyone who helped out yesterday.


May 4
Things are not so happy today.  Tried to correct that category problem where my book wasn't listing under science fiction and it isn't fixing itself.  I'm probably losing half of my target audience from internal traffic within Amazon itself as science fiction fans are not seeing it.  So if you know anyone who likes science fiction and mechas, please let them know about this. I'm contacting Amazon support to see if they can fix it.

May 3

I'm happy to report that I'm managing to give it out to readers to kick start it.
It started in the Amazon free sales ranks at 6567 this morning and it is now at 1387.
Only problem is that I've found that the category science fiction / military doesn't seem to show up under science fiction and I'm probably losing a lot of SF readers checking the Amazon free lists. But it is #5 in War. 
I've had some eager readers and I'm glad they're liking it. I got one awesome review!
I'll keep this post updated for the duration of the promo.

Tuesday, 24 April 2012

HARM - A Story From The World Of Exocrisis Blue

HARM
Visualizing intense mech vs. mech combat with near future and alien technology!

In HARM, mankind is fighting a desperate action to keep the invading aliens at bay and to keep from being exterminated.  HARM is set in the future world of Exocrisis Blue where the Alien War is well underway.  The nations of Earth have been ravaged by unrelenting combat with the Blue Newts.

This stand-alone story (approximately 9400 words or 30+ pages) is all about future robotic warfare with intense mech verses mech battles.  The story introduces several continuing characters and the background for Exocrisis Blue during the Alien War.  All the weapons of the near future battlefield are utilized from autonomous battlefield robots, main battle tanks, powered infantry in exoskeleton battlesuits to unmanned drones. HARM is about the first combat use of a giant, humanoid robot, fighting machines against the invaders.  Can these new humanoid weapons turn the tide of the war?

HARM = Humanoid Assault Reconnaissance Machine

Exocrisis Blue
Exocrisis Blue occurs sixteen years after the end of the Alien War.  By the end of the year long Alien War, many of the old governments of Earth had collapsed and a radically new set of nations had emerged.  In this new world man shares the Earth with the alien Blue Newts in an uneasy truce.  Nations, cities, and people have rebuilt their infrastructure and lives.  For a new generation, the Alien War is no longer immediate, it is something in the past.

At the General Automata Corporation Development Institute a new generation of HARMs has been created.  To pilot these more advanced machines, youthful HARM pilots are needed to maximize the potential between the new neural interfaces.  The military training facilities at the institute selects and trains the best of the best with experienced instructors and training techniques.  However, deep inside the institute is the much more secretive “AO Sensor Facility."  Events are in motion and the fate of the world hinges on the actions of a few.
 

Monday, 19 March 2012

Conversations With Intelligent Weapons

I'm currently working on some new writing / world building projects that combine hard SF and anime mechas.  Needless to say there will be robot battles, a mecha training academy, and some teen angst, but the adults will carry the day.  My mechas are not big like the Mazinger or Gundam in height (60 - 70 feet), but maybe 40 - 50 feet high.  They can hide behind a two story building, be nimble, yet well armoured and pack a big punch.  If you do watch anime, the closest thing would probably be the M9 Gernsbacks or the ARX-7 Arbalest from Full Metal Panic.  The mechs can't be too big a target and need good defences as they have to be able to survive in an environment full of cheap anti-tank missiles and rockets.
ARX-7 with Shotcannon   / Peter Lok
Human pilots would operate the mechas (as in who wouldn't want to drive one of these bad boys), but there would be extensive automation with AI to help run the thing.  As these mechas are fighting on next generation battlefield with computers everywhere I'm going to have to take into account robot swarming tactics, UAVs, fully autonomous battle field robots, and issues with advanced AI.

Artificial Intelligence
AI of some form is going to play a big role both as a decision support system and to actually assist in operating my mechas.  I'm pretty sure I'm not going to deal with rogue AI's as I don't want to deal with this trope: "Whenever an Artificial Intelligence (A.I.) is introduced in a story, there is a very good chance that it will, for whatever reason, become evil and attempt to Turn Against Its Masters, Crush Kill Destroy All Humans, and/or Take Over the World. It doesn't matter what safeguards its creators install — the moment it crosses the line into sapience, it has a strong chance of going rogue at some point." From all AIs are a Crapshoot - TVTropes.org

I think I'd rather have AIs that only assist humans or work at a human master's direct order.  If they are really smart, then they would take on personas and "a human-like life of their own."  The AIs would be able to have deep conversations, identify most human emotional states, but not get upset or emotional themselves. For any fully autonomous bots they would hopefully they obey Isaac Asimov's Three Laws of Robotics!
  1. A robot may not injure a human being or, through inaction, allow a human being to come to harm.
  2. A robot must obey the orders given to it by human beings, except where such orders would conflict with the First Law.
  3. A robot must protect its own existence as long as such protection does not conflict with the First or Second Laws.
Any robots on the battlefield, especially with fully autonomous battlefield robots, you have the Kill Chain in which a human should be involved.  "The Kill Chain consists of 6 "links"; Find, Fix, Track, Target, Engage and Assess, (FFTTEA). To put it in more detail, it is the ability to locate, discern, and track targets and to employ the best weapons available to achieve the desired lethal effects; then to assess results and to reengage speedily as required."  If the AI were faulty you could override, otherwise it is kind of late. Friendly fire is an issue with automated weapons as they cannot tell friend from foe, but if you didn't care and just wanted an area wiped out, then I guess you would just deploy your killbots!

To round this out I thought I would mention some movies with bad AIs and their conversational skills! All of these movies have some chit-chat with the AI over good and bad, etc. Myself, I don't think I'd ever do a scene where you have someone begging a robot for their life and showing them pictures of their wife and kids.

M5 - Ultimate Computer episode from Star Trek.
An experimental computer is installed on the Enterprise and it goes amok during war games and damages other Federation starships.  Kirk must convince the M5 computer running his ship that is has erred and then save his ship after the computer suffers from remorse... Some pretty cool clips on Youtube about this episode.  There was also V'ger and Nomad too, but M5 was the best.

Dark Star
Dark Star is a 1974 science fiction dark comedy directed by John Carpenter (of The Thing fame).
"In the middle of the 22nd century, humankind has reached a point in its technological advancement to enable colonization of the far reaches of the universe. Armed with artificially intelligent "Thermostellar Triggering Devices", the scout ship Dark Star and its crew have been in space alone for twenty years on a mission to destroy "unstable planets" which might threaten future colonization."  From Wikipedia.

I only ever saw this movie once a long time ago, but I still remember the scene about Lt. Doolittle having to talk down a "smart bomb" that was accidentally activated.

Terminator 2
John Conner develops a bond with the T-800 terminator robot sent to protect it and teaches it that killing is bad.  They even develop a father-son type relationship. Even Sarah Conner looks to the future with renewed hope, as a Terminator can learn the value of human life.

Aliens
Bishop the synthetic organism on the crew doesn't go rogue! Go figure!?!  In fact, he/it goes and volunteers for a dangerous mission even though it doesn't want to as there are aliens running all over the place.  I'll take a Bishop anyday.

The Iron Giant
Big galactic battle robot learns that killing is bad and death is permanent from a young boy. If you missed this animated feature that was a box office flop, but now a classic, it is well worth a watch.

Stealth
The United States Navy has built three new top-of-the-range fighter jets called F/A-37 Talons. Three elite pilots are chosen to fly them.  The pilots are introduced to an autonomous UCAV piloted by an artificial intelligence "EDI" (Extreme Deep Invader). Anyhow, EDI gets hit by lightning, become really smart with a skewed moral compass and goes rogue.  At the end, EDI is convinced by the lead pilot to be good again to help finish out the movie!  It was cliched and dumb in parts, but I enjoyed it anyhow.

Tuesday, 6 March 2012

Tales From A Yellow Star Published

My collection of short stories went live on the Amazon Kindle Store today. Hurrah!!!

http://www.amazon.com/Tales-Yellow-Star-ebook/dp/B007HHQGKM/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1331090798&sr=8-2

The four short stories about space exploration set in the near future to the far future.  It is approximately 90 pages long between all of the stories.
  • Orbital Decay: The crew of a space station is left to their own devices after a global catastrophe.
  • Guardian of Life: A war machine left over from an ancient conflict.
  • Pattern From The Past: It was a new planetary colony with an old problem.
  • Shaman: Ancient ritual and technology combine on an alien world.

The cover above was the second cover design I worked on that incorporated the more dynamic text swoosh and the colorful space colony.  This was much nicer than the first cover design shown below with a black and white solar power satellite (also courtesy of NASA).