Sunday 28 July 2013

Review of the Star Carrier Series - Earth Strike, Center of Gravity, Singularity, and Deep Space

Mini-review #12
This is a series of short reviews for military SF and mecha SF.  You will not see a review of something I don't like as it isn't worth writing about in that case, but I will tell you what works for me and what doesn't about the stories I did like.  
Star Carrier is a well written series of space navy books by Ian Douglas who is actually William H. Keith.  The author has already written a few trilogies and has a list of writing credits a mile long so you know the guy has honed his craft.  People have described this series by relating it to Battlestar Galactica as there is a STAR CARRIER (wow, that was a shocker).  I would say that is where the similarities start and end myself as I liked this a heck of a lot more than the new Battlestar.  Earth and its colonies are under attack by multiple alien races working for the Sh'daar and is losing the war.  Colony after colony is being stripped away from us and Earth is the next target. The politicians and HQ hesitate on the next best move, but one man, Admiral Alexander Koenig, decides to take the fight to the aliens before they can mass and destroy us. 

The story focuses on the Admiral and one of the fighter pilots Trevor Gray.  You get the action from the fighter cockpit and from the bridge of the carrier so there is plenty of variety to read about.  Both of the characters develop over time and each has their own personal demons to overcome.

The stories move along fairly quickly and are good action reading.  The author does tend to go into explaining the tech a little too much and the battles with the capital ships tend to flow the same way.  A few naval battles have a strike fleet do a high speed flyby of an enemy fleet at near lightspeed and hammer them.  Basically an AI controlled drive by shooting with big railguns and other heavy weaponry.  The battles are well done, but tend to be standard with a few extra surprise moves.  I'll talk more about the fighters later on in the review and they are probably my favourite part of the series.

I highly recommend this series for anyone who likes reading about well thought out space combat and likes cheering on the human underdog.  And it is priced reasonably on the Kindle.

Does it have a cast of characters listing? 
No.  There are really two main characters, with maybe a half a dozen key supporting characters.  Action tends to center around the carrier America and its crew.  Fighter pilots tend to die a fair bit, but so do the capital ships with their nameless crew of hundreds.

What is the scope / scale of the story? 
I'd say the story is epic in scope with a fleet on a desperate mission within a larger galactic context.  There are many mysteries to the Sh'daar.  The naval engagements are between fleets of 50 to 100 ships with hundreds of fighters involved.

Does it have likeable characters?
Admiral Koenig is a brilliant strategist who needs to deal with both aliens and the idiotic government back on Earth.  The man is very likeable as a leader.  Gray is the outsider in Naval aviation.  He come from a primitive fringe in the US that rejects nanotech implants and big government.  A practical man, he puts up with constant ribbing from his squadron mates, and still saves the day.

Does it have an entertaining storyline?
Yes. It is pretty much one long thrill ride with breathers to do character development, political subterfuge, and world building.  It is a long campaign to save the Earth from aliens and itself.

How is the internal consistency / plausibility?
This was well done.  The setup for the story and the politics on Earth sounded real and not far fetched.  There is the main Confederation faction on Earth that also has dissent as it was really formed out of expedience and not a full desire by the various nation states to integrate.  By book 4 you will know what I mean.  The aliens are pretty cool with everything from gas bags to tentacled critters that are not humanoid and don't think like we do.  The tech is nicely done and the use of nanotech magic is consistently and usefully applied.  In fact, the Sh'daar are fighting us as they are worried about continual human development of  GRIN (Genetic, Robotic, Information, and Nano processes) that might enable us to have a Technological Singularity Event and transcend to something more powerful.

If there are any criticisms to level it would be with the chain of command and the aliens.  It seems like the politicians and naval admirals are idiots on Earth and the aliens are too predictable in their strategy.  This applies to all the books.

What cool bonus features are there?
The big ships are mushroom like in shape with big armoured domes of ice at the bow for fuel and protection.  The star fighters are very cool as they are pushed / pulled by micro-singularities to enable massive accelerations / decelerations in the tens of thousands of Gs.  They are made out of a nanomatrix hull that can change configuration for high speed, attack, and even atmospheric combat.  Nanotech implants in the pilots allow them to control many systems by touch and a thought.  I like the term "thought-clicking."

Ships fight at very high speeds and the tactics employed reflect this (e.g. shooting sand as a weapon). There are railguns, nuclear missiles, particle beams, kinetic gatling guns, and all types of energy weapons.

Finally, the three points I list below are not criticisms of this series, but are issues with most space combat SF.  Kudos to the author for describing the tech so well that I actually thought about these things.  The tech is sufficiently advanced in this series that I wonder:
  1. Why aren't the micro-singularities used as weapons (had a similar beef with the impenetrable drive fields in the Honor Harrington books).  Nothing stops a singularity missile that can rip through a capital ship's shields and armour and it's cheap. 
  2. Combat is sufficiently deadly that I wonder why large crews are still required for anything, and is even a single human pilot required to die in a star fighter when the AI and nanotech is so sophisticated.  They can assemble a starfighter in a supply ship in half a day and can nanofacture food and anything else (people?).
  3. How do you protect a planet from enemies who can hurtle projectiles at you at near lightspeed?  Big catastrophic, ecosystem ending event occurs next.  Stealth the big rocks and shoot thousands and thousands of them.  Who needs specialized bombardment ships to do this from orbit or even ship to ship combat?

Saturday 27 July 2013

Neo-Ace Chapter 12 Posted at Wattpad (Amazon Field Trip)

Chapter 12 has been posted up at Wattpad.  We learn more about Blue Newt society and take a field trip deep into the Amazon to visit their colony.  You can hit the Wattpad link here to read Neo-Ace Academy for free.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.

It has been a pretty busy week of visiting the mountains and writing.  I was aiming to get three chapters done and I'm working on the third.  I'm finding that the writing is moving along and I'm looking forward to finishing the next few chapters so the action can pick up again as the end of the novel ends with a few bangs.

Over at Wattpad, I'm finding that it is pretty hard to find readers.  I've had a few good ones, but generally, there is a great deal of social networking going on with fanning and all that.  It takes too much effort away from the writing to pull off being popular so I'm going to let it sit.  Thanks to all the friends and the traffic being driven there from this blog and my other Tokyoexcess blog.


Friday 26 July 2013

Pacific Rim Monsters and Mecha Inspires Fans and Critics

It has been a couple of weeks since the summer release of Pacific Rim.  I was pretty excited to go and see this kaiju versus mecha flick myself.  I'm writing science fiction with an anime inspired mecha focus (but with a more realistic military SF interpretation) so it had particular interest for me.  I came out of the movie thinking it was pretty darn good and would see it again.  Guillermo del Toro did not disappoint as he does a great job with the giant robots and monsters that just drags you willingly along for the ride.  I'll definitely get the Blu-ray and watch it again to see the details and things I missed on the first viewing as the world building was very rich.

More interestingly, the movie hasn't been the blockbuster they were hoping for in America, but it has done fairly well.  I suspect they will make a pile of money in Japan and China when it opens at the end of July.  In Korea it has been a big hit and I think it will continue to do well wherever Japanese anime and kaiju films like Godzilla have been part of the childhood culture.  My books probably need to be translated to Japanese, Korean, and Chinese :)

Best of all, you are seeing some good speculative buzz along with both critical and complimentary buzz in non-SF circles.  Places like Space.com, Scientific American blogs, and other sites have been running articles.  People have seen the movie and have been inspired to write about it from both the art, biology, and engineering sides.  This is good stuff.  I've linked to the articles below so you can see for yourself.  Most of them are pretty good and fun to read!

Friday 19 July 2013

Edmonton As A Science Fiction Setting (Chapter 11 of Neo Ace Posted At Wattpad)

Neo-Ace is set in Edmonton, but mainly at the Neo-Ace Academy with the city in the background.  In this chapter I talk a little about the future history of the city during the Alien War.  The romance between Jake and Mayumi begins to blossom in the latest chapter and more is learned about Mayumi's special abilities.

You can hit the Wattpad link here to read Neo-Ace Academy.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.

I have to note that it wasn't too bad picking Edmonton as a setting for military SF.  Both Calgary and Edmonton have some cool futuristic attributes now in terms of urban design and development.  These cities are rapidly growing, but without the historical baggage of other major urban areas as they are young cities.
  1. There is a Canadian Forces Base here in the form of CFB Edmonton.
  2. Even Tom Clancy destroyed the High Level Bridge in this first volume of Endwar when Alberta gets invaded by Russians.  The Mounties put up a good fight along with the Alberta good old boys.
  3. Cold Lake is a big air force base and air gunnery range.
  4. Tons of training happens at Wainwright for maneuvers and war games.
  5. There are high tech research and industries here.
  6. Calgary and Edmonton are two big cities that could be linked by bullet train eventually.
  7. Light rail transit exists in both cities (same German manufacturer too) with the newer cars looking quite nice.
  8. Canada produces a great deal of science fiction in our authors and on TV / Film.  Just off the top of my head, Pacific Rim, X-Files, Stargate SG-1, Continuum, Defiance, Andromeda, etc.  Even the first Gundam pilot, Amuro Ray, was Canadian and so is Captain Kirk (in his alter ego of William Shatner). Heck, even the Wolverine was created in the Canadian Rockies and hid out in Alberta.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_science_fiction_TV_and_radio_shows_produced_in_Canada
What I changed.
  1. Calgary and Edmonton get attacked by the Newts and partially razed during the Alien War.
  2. I also destroyed the High Level Bridge (don't like it much anyways).  
  3. I moved GAC Headquarters and R&D from the southern USA to Edmonton to avoid the Newts who were very active in the States.  My first story HARM was set near Huntsville.
  4. Canada also breaks up with Quebec going its separate way.
  5. America breaks up into eastern and western factions after the death of the president due to Newt reprisal for destroying the mothership. True America (the eastern faction) absorbs the maritime provinces.
  6. Pacifica (Western America), Canada, and Japan form CAJUN as a common defence organization.
  7. I moved many American and Japanese refugees into Canada, bolstering the populations of Vancouver, Edmonton, Calgary, and more.
  8. The Mounties even intervene (Royal Canadian Mechanized Police?)
What I get to do.
  • Live fire exercises (coming up in Neo-Ace).
  • Mountain scenery.
  • Rebuild Edmonton in a more futuristic manner.
  • Add in a massive GAC mecha research centre, secret research labs and more.
  • Calgary Stampede setting.
  • Can even have a real hot springs setting for a scene.
  • Canadian setting that works.
  • Multicultural force in CAJUN and even the regular forces of all alliance nations.
  • Our prime minister is even a good one in the story.

Saturday 13 July 2013

Mayumi's Revelation - Chapter 10 of Neo Ace is Up at Wattpad

Focusing on character and plot development for the next few chapters.  The heroine Mayumi gets to explore her new powers more in this chapter.  An unexpected meeting happens and the buildup continues to the second half of the book.  I have the entire second half plotted now and it is going to be a roller coaster ride of action to the end.  Mecha vs mecha combat, scientists running for cover, nasty mercenary raiders attacking, hacking, and secrets will be revealed. You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.


Monday 8 July 2013

Chapter 9 of Neo-Ace is up at Wattpad!

Just posted Chapter 9 of Neo-Ace up at Wattpad. What is the technology behind the amazing cadet performance in their mechas?  You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter. This writing should appeal to mecha fans of Gundam, Evangelion, and military SF fans who like writing with military academies and techno-thrillers.

Still working on Chapter 14, been a busy summer, but hoping to get it done this week if not tonight.