Showing posts with label mecha. Show all posts
Showing posts with label mecha. Show all posts

Sunday, 20 September 2015

Review of Tin Men by Christoper Golden

Mini-review #17

This is a series of short reviews for military SF and mecha SF.  You will not see a review of something I don't like as it isn't worth writing about in that case, but I will tell you what works for me and what doesn't about the stories I did like. 


This book was a pretty enjoyable read, but it almost threw me off at the start.  The premise of the novel has America being the global peacekeeper in the near future because of they have the Remote Infantry Corps, a war winning technology that no one else has.  These Remote Infantry Corps ("Tin Men") are armies of remotely operated humanoid robots (human sized) that are extremely strong, extremely tough, and are faster and more dexterous than an actual human.   An American operator basically controls the robot as their surrogate body (like they were in it - aka the Avatar movie) from a base in Germany to any point in the world.  This whole peacekeeping aspect (which is a good thing in many ways) and American dominance via tech almost made me stop reading (it was pretty high handed), but it is an integral part of the story in making the Tin Men hated by many enemies around the globe.  As the story progresses, something terrible disrupts the entire world and you see the soldiers as human beings and really hope they get out of their fix as they are trapped operating the robots.  I recommend this book as a good read.

Does it have a cast of characters listing?
No.  It basically operates at a platoon level with three sets of protagonists.  One being the soldiers originally in the Middle East, another being the President of the United States and this protection detail, and the base troops for the Tin Men in Germany. 

What is the scope / scale of the story?
Street level combat with squads and platoons within wider battles around the globe.  A murky, unknown force is behind the disruption of the world.

Does it have likeable characters?
PFC Danny Kelso is the main protagonist and you like the guy and quite likable.  I like the fact that there are male and female soldiers in the field and you really want them to find a way out of their situation.

Does it have an entertaining story line?
Yes.  The story line moves quickly and shifts between the multiple groups of characters.  There are good survival, journey, and political sub-plots to the book.  Having some civilians mixed into the Tin Men as they journey across a devastated world was a good touch.

How is the internal consistency / plausibility?
Hmmm, this one is tough one.  The tech is internally consistent in the book and it works for the story - I enjoyed the story even if I didn't think the tech was plausible.  I'd have to say the plausibility is a no, based on the level of tech that would exist to support the Tin Men (it is near future).  SPOILER WARNING : **** The plausibility of transferring a consciousness to an artificial brain via a high speed satellite link is a big no. ****  The robots are also extremely tough.  Something humanoid size wouldn't be resistant to .50 or grenade launchers to the level they are in the book, but they are feared because of this.

What cool bonus features are there?
The whole concept of remotely operated infantry robots is pretty cool.  Since combat is always about getting down and dirty, this is a nice extrapolation from our current drone operators. 

Sunday, 26 October 2014

The Bolo Stories of Keith Laumer and Ogre the Cybertank Wargame

It probably was destiny to eventually write some mecha fiction.  I grew up with Bolo and Ogre, so even without the Japanese mecha influence, the seeds were already there.  From the Japanese perspective, mechas are about humanoid fighting machines with hotshot/hot head pilots fighting against some evil threat.  From the western perspective they are robots who are efficient war machines that fight wars sometimes for justice/survival and sometime for more pragmatic reasons.  The Japanese believe everything has a spirit, but some of that is also found in the Bolos, but not so much for the Ogre!  I've tried to find synergy between these two influences in my Exocrisis stories, but here is a little article about the battlefield robots of my youth.

BOLO!
You have to love the name "Intercontinental Siege Unit," but that is what a large Bolo is capable of.  These enormous, sentient robot tanks were etched into the memory of a couple of generations of western SF fans in the form of print stories, by Keith Laumer, well before any movies or even the term "drone" was used for robot combat units in the 1970s.  Armed with Hellbore cannons, infinite repeaters, force shields, and thick armour, they have fought on numerous alien worlds to defend humanity.
The stories have held up pretty good with time and I still go back and reread them every so often.  In fact, other authors such as David Weber and many more have just added to the number of Bolo stories over the years.  You would think a stories about robot tanks would be boring as it is about a thinking robot who doesn't have romance, or personality conflicts, or all that human emotional baggage, but the stories are often about people involved with the robots, even if the Bolos are the centerpiece.  These robots act for the honour of the regiment, they are fiercely loyal to their human masters,even when discarded as junk, and they seem to be able to develop friendship with a human commander who is often their pilot.

The stories are now available as ebooks (such as "The Complete Bolo") which is great, as my old copy of Bolo is nicely yellowed now.  Hopefully a new generation of SF fans can enjoy these stories.  Make sure you get the original stories by Keith Laumer first, and not the later Bolo add-on stories to start.  A couple of my favourites are: Relic of War and Combat Unit, but they were all good.  If you've had too much about good, loyal robots then it is time to read the Berserker series by Saberhagen to get some bad robots afterwards.

Ogre, the Wargame
Ogre was Microgame #1 from Metagaming in the 1970s which is now gone.  However, the designer, Steve Jackson bought up the rights and is still producing the game.  I have like a second edition of the game and it is a simple introduction of wargaming with map and cardboard counters.  The game has one player taking the role of an enormous cybernetic tank, while the other player commands a force of conventional armour, infantry, and artillery to stop it.  The game design on this and the followup game GEV are just classic and I doubt it will ever go out of style.
The Ogres were probably influenced by the Bolo stories, especially for the initial artwork, but they are really their own original invention.  It is a niche wargaming franchise with loyal fans, but I don't think many people have heard of it in the last fifteen years or so.  There were multiple expansions for the game, and even miniatures and a crazy Kickstarter to build a giant Ogre Deluxe Box.  I was interested in the edition, but only wanted a box with plastic miniatures, not 3D cardboard standups.  Definitely check out the artist's website below for the original Ogre art.

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Saturday, 23 November 2013

Do I Use KDP Select or Not? And all About Ebook Production for my Mecha SF.

I just put the chapter 28 draft up on Wattpad this morning, and the combat inside the GAC labs comes to a conclusion.  You can have a look at the draft of Neo Ace over at Wattpad here for free.

Nice and frosty on my garage window. Canadian winter in Edmonton :)

I've managed to give the first eleven chapter of Neo Ace a second proof and am having my copy editor do the third reading.  Hopefully, I'll get through another ten chapters or so this weekend.  Now that the writing for the book is complete I have to think hard about how to promote it.

I like to tell stories but am not a big promoter or PR guy.  I understand business and sales though.  So here are the steps to producing a book for me.
  1. You need a product to sell and promote, so the first step is to have a product or products preferably.  I've written a short story, a novella, and now a short novel set in my Exocrisis Blue universe.  Obviously if you're going to create some serious intellectual property, or a brand, you also need to think up a catchy names and background too.
     
  2. So, now that you have a product, you need to have packaging / art.  I've already done the cover art for Neo Ace myself.  It is passable and looks fairly good, but a professional graphic artist could do better, especially if I had commissioned or licensed some mecha art of the right style.  However, this costs $$$ and you really have to think that you'll get your money back.  If I was writing romance, I would not hesitate to use a pro artist and pay the $250 to $500 for a pretty good cover.  In this genre, there is plenty of stock art and photos to use and the artists know how to use them.  For mecha scifi, if you want mecha art, this is HARD.  You'll be looking for mecha artists who are not book cover people and the licensing could be expensive.  Finding compatible art is also difficult as all mechs are different - not like having a couple kissing or something which is generic.  You will need a large cover image that can be shrunk down.  Make sure your cover looks good when it is postage stamp sized.

    BTW, for mecha SF / military SF in my case, I'm pretty sure I'm not going to get my money back on the cover art.  I'd have to sell at least 200 copies at $3 a pop to break even with a little bit of beer money.  The artist makes the money here.  This genre sells, but unless you're established, have tons or reviews, or a great social network, I don't think you'll get your money back soon.
     
  3. Converting your Word document to an ebook.  Some people hate Word, but I use it professionally for work and I love the tool despite its idiosyncracies - you won't find a better tool - and simpler is not better).  Follow the directions on Amazon to convert it and you won't have too many problems.  Keep your formatting simple in this case and check the conversion on multiple ereaders - also watch the font size.
     
  4. Finally, your book is ready.  I'm assuming you have a KDP account to do direct publishing on Amazon.  I haven't tried other ebookstores, but I will eventually.  I'm going to have to get ISBN numbers, but this is free in Canada for Canadian authors.  Once you set up the account, publishing is pretty straight forward and there are many articles and even instructions on the KDP website.
     
  5. This is the hard part for me.  I have my blogs (Tokyo Excess, Peter Lok), my Exocrisis Blue facebook page, my Amazon profile page, my twitter feeds, but I can tell you, it isn't moving my books at a terribly fast rate.  I'm pretty sure there are more people out there who would like my writing, but I can't reach them right now.  So, what do I do to make the best of my situation?

    You could pay for advertising like ads on Facebook or Google.  This might be a good idea, but it will cost money again.  You can try having review sites review your book.  Review sites might not look at your book unless you already have reviews and it might cost money or you are in a waiting queue.  You could promote it on forums like Reddit, Goodreads, etc., and other blogs.  I've read that having many Facebook or Twitter followers is a nice exponential force multiplier - they can get the word out quick, but you need followers in the thousands.  It is like 100 or a 1000 sales to one if you have this channel available.

    Since I'm in this for the long haul (that is to say years to a decade), I don't have to race on this.  Trickle sales will do.  Big sales would be great.  I'm selling to the long tail, so the long haul only helps me as I sell more books over time.  So what is my major tool for promotion?  It is my blogs, and enrolment in KDP Select.  KDP Select allows me to put my ebook for free for five days for every ninety day period.  The downside is that it is exclusive.  If you read the Amazon contract carefully, you are not allowed to put a sample chapter anywhere else electronically (you're supposed to link to Amazon instead).  So you are stuck on Amazon for three months before you can opt out.
     
  6. For my Neo Ace book, I was really wondering if I should use KDP Select for it or my other books.  I finally decided that I should use KDP Select at least one more time.  My reasoning is as follows:
    • I'm only on Amazon, so the exclusive clause is not a big deal.
    • What is a big deal is the fact that I would have to remove my Wattpad chapters to comply with the contract terms.  I'd leave stubs up to keep the pages alive, but would have to remove the content for the 90 days.  Right now, it is just the draft content up there, so I'd put up final copies of the first six chapters after the KDP Select period.  If I had 30,000 views on Wattpad this would be a no go, but I don't, so it is okay.
    • Giving copies away for free has worked for me in the past to get reviews and downloads.  Since nothing is costing me money up front, and my major investment is personal effort, getting read is GOOD.  The free promo should sell more books.

  7. Pricing Strategy.  My short story and novella will remain at 99 cents (can't go any lower on Amazon).  My ebook will sell at 99 cents for the first month, then go to $2.99 or $3 to infinity and beyond.  $3 is a reasonable price for an ebook novel.  I have problems myself paying more than $5.99 for an ebook as I keep thinking I'm being ripped off. 
That's all for now.  Thanks for listening to my ramble here - which was just blasted out as I typed.  And yes, please buy or pick up a copy of Neo Ace in December when it becomes available on Amazon!  And tell your friends.

Sunday, 27 October 2013

Neo Ace Mecha Scifi - Chapter 24 Combat at the Labs

Chapter 24 of Neo Ace is now up at Wattpad

Resistance builds against the attacking raiders in this chapter.  I can tell you that I'm pretty pumped to be writing the last three or four chapters of Neo Ace.  I already have some great ideas for the next book which concludes the major story arc.  Major engagements with wave after wave of drones, naval engagements, and of course ground combat with mechs and regular armour.  Where the main characters end up is kind of predetermined, but it is going to an action filled next book - just have to finish and revise Neo Ace first though!

Sunrise in Edmonton
Kind of busy this weekend though as I had to do the fall yard cleanup yesterday.  Today it is grey and rainy / snowing so it was good everything was done yesterday.  I'm writing Chapter 30 today, which is a final showdown chapter for a few of the protagonists in their big mechs. 


Have a read for free on Wattpad and let me know if you like it!  You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.  Also check out my books on Amazon at my publications page here. If you enjoy the reading, please leave a like or a comment as it helps to get the word out!

Saturday, 19 October 2013

Neo Ace Mecha Scifi - Chapter 23 Posted

Chapter 23 of Neo Ace is now up at Wattpad
I forgot to post last week about chapter 22 being up due to Canadian Thanksgiving, so I guess it is double feature this week.  Last week, the mercenaries were moving on the GAC headquarters and this week we have Janet Chan and the CEO of General Automata Corporation viewing some of the secret research going on in their labs.

Fall in Calgary.  Alberta doesn't have much for reds in the fall, mainly yellow.

Have a read for free on Wattpad and let me know if you like it!  You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.  Also check out my books on Amazon at my publications page here. If you enjoy the reading, please leave a like or a comment as it helps to get the word out!

It is now the near the end of fall in Alberta here and half the trees have already lost their leaves.   Still, here are a couple of photos from around Calgary and Edmonton to let you know what fall is like out here.
Whitemud Park in the middle of the city here in Edmonton.  Note the beaver dam in the foreground.
Whitemud park.  Saw a big woodpecker and a big black crane fly by.
Calgary City Centre.


Saturday, 5 October 2013

New Chapter of Neo Ace Mecha Sci Fi and the Cover Image

Chapter 21 of Neo Ace is now up at Wattpad
This chapter has the bad guys showing up in force.  The writing has been moving along pretty good.  I'm maintaining my chapter a week so I'm still expecting to wrap up in November.  It's all action writing right now so Neo Ace is ending with a bang.

Have a read for free on Wattpad and let me know if you like it!  You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.  Also check out my books on Amazon at my publications page here. If you enjoy the reading, please leave a like or a comment as it helps to get the word out!

I have to say that I've enjoyed writing this science fiction mecha tale, but it has been a long haul.  It will be about a year of my spare time spent on writing this book, but the length of time it to write it has also helped me to iron out some quirks of the story and improve the characters.  Despite having big robots involved, the story has stayed focused on the characters, especially the teen cadets.  In some ways I've been surprised by how some of the characters developed, but everything has worked out for the best.  This book has a blend of adult and teen characters that make for some pretty good reading.

When I'm done the last chapter I'll take a short break.  Then it will be proofing time, and then my editor will go through it.  I think there are already one or two changes I want to make, but the story and plotting will fundamentally be the same.  I'm probably going to take a bit of a breather after I finish the actual publication on Amazon and just work on the detailed outline for the next book that will wrap up Exocrisis Blue. 

Neo Ace Mecha Science Fiction Cover

Last week I was working on the cover for Neo Ace.  Here is a lower rez version of the image that will likely be the cover for Neo Ace when it is published.  I could always change my mind, but this will do for now. The image of the pilot girl is credited to DM7 from Shutterstock.  I think it looks fairly good with an outline of the head of a HARM unit behind the female pilot. 


Saturday, 14 September 2013

Odin Class Mechs Used in Battle By Cadets

Chapter 18 of Neo-Ace is now up at Wattpad.  The cadets are finally training on the mechas that their PRECOG systems are designed to take full advantage of.  More of Mayumi's abilities become apparent and these new Odin class mechas are being utilized to their full potential.

Have a read for free on Wattpad and let me know if you like it!  You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.  Also check out my books on Amazon at my publications page here. 

Power Rangers Super Sentai Giant Robot Toy seen at the toy store.  All the way over here from Japan.

It's a beautiful fall afternoon and after a little yardwork I'm back to writing up Chapter 26.  I can see the end of the novel within 10 chapters!  I'm looking forward to finishing this work and beginning the detailed outline for the sequel novel where the action really heats up in a global high-stakes game.  This first novel has a solid ending though that completes the first arc.  The second arc basically builds on it, but I won't leave the reader hanging at the end of Neo-Ace.

Friday, 26 July 2013

Pacific Rim Monsters and Mecha Inspires Fans and Critics

It has been a couple of weeks since the summer release of Pacific Rim.  I was pretty excited to go and see this kaiju versus mecha flick myself.  I'm writing science fiction with an anime inspired mecha focus (but with a more realistic military SF interpretation) so it had particular interest for me.  I came out of the movie thinking it was pretty darn good and would see it again.  Guillermo del Toro did not disappoint as he does a great job with the giant robots and monsters that just drags you willingly along for the ride.  I'll definitely get the Blu-ray and watch it again to see the details and things I missed on the first viewing as the world building was very rich.

More interestingly, the movie hasn't been the blockbuster they were hoping for in America, but it has done fairly well.  I suspect they will make a pile of money in Japan and China when it opens at the end of July.  In Korea it has been a big hit and I think it will continue to do well wherever Japanese anime and kaiju films like Godzilla have been part of the childhood culture.  My books probably need to be translated to Japanese, Korean, and Chinese :)

Best of all, you are seeing some good speculative buzz along with both critical and complimentary buzz in non-SF circles.  Places like Space.com, Scientific American blogs, and other sites have been running articles.  People have seen the movie and have been inspired to write about it from both the art, biology, and engineering sides.  This is good stuff.  I've linked to the articles below so you can see for yourself.  Most of them are pretty good and fun to read!

Sunday, 2 June 2013

Musings About Writing, Military Science Fiction, and SF / Anime in General

I wasn't even planning on writing this post this morning, but it was raining and I didn't want to get electrofried replacing the front door light fixture.  Instead of this, I'm going to write about some observations about military SF and mecha anime I've noticed over the last couple of years.  I'll also highlight some military SF resources on the Internet that I think are valuable.

I've always liked science fiction and also like military SF.  I also used to to play war games that came with hundreds of cardboard counters on paper maps so I'm used to big fat rule books of minutia.  Having said that I did not realize how big of a gulf there is between the main SF genre and the military SF sub-genre AND the gulf between anime fans and mecha anime fans.  I kind of stepped into the middle of no mans land by trying to write good SF mecha stories with inspiration from mecha anime.  So I write in a grey area for two sub-genres and try to mix them.  Hmmm... Don't think I'm selling a million copies here, but it is something I want to finish just to tell a good story.

Two years ago I started blogging again (see Tokyo Excess for Japanese pop culture) and then started writing again with Exocrisis Blue six months later.  I've been somewhat successful with both endeavors, but I'm not giving up my day job any time soon as a business analyst:
  • My Tokyo Excess blog has about 450 page views a day right now, not tons, but not a little either.  I like Japanese pop culture and it is a good complementary mix with my other writing which is real military SF with an anime-inspired mecha element.
  • I've sold hundreds of copies of HARM and Raid on Kahamba, and gave away about fifteen hundred copies or so as promos.  I've been pretty explicit about it being military SF with mecha so people don't slam you for something they don't like (e.g. I don't like big robots or I thought this was a romance).
  • I'm also continuing the Exocrisis Bue story with two short novels about the Neo-Ace Academy to train the next generation of super mecha pilots.  I'm about halfway through the first novel right now, and you can see the draft of the novel at Wattpad here.  Follow me there if you want to show support for my writing.  The best place to follow me in general is on my twitter feeds.  I update the Tostzilla feed the most.
Observations About Military SF
Military SF is the writing of  David Drake (Hammer's Slammers), Keith Laumer (Bolo), David Weber (Honor Harrington), H.G. Wells (War of the Worlds), Heinlein (Starship Troopers), etc.  I'm not going into a detailed analysis, but it has to have a heavy military element obviously or focus on military operations.  You'll see that my categorization is broad is it starts to quickly includes more general SF after point 1 below too.

This genre comes in three main flavours to me:
  1. Combat oriented.  It is all about the fight, the men, the machines.  It's gritty, there's blood and circuits everywhere.  I'm fighting to just see tomorrow and the honour of the regiment.  I think many fans of the genre are in this boat.  Bolo falls in this category along with Hammer's Slammers.  The Star Carrier series is a recent one in this genre, along with The Lost Fleet series, but I think both of these entertaining series worked well as they were space naval with fleets and some politics, so not super small unit operations.
  2. Political / Social.  Military is mentioned, there might be a description about Operation So-and-So.  The main story is about power structures, machinations between political bodies and alien races, and it could be generational.  Grunts die, but that's war, lets focus on other things.  Foundation by Asimov is in this category.
  3. Combination.  There is a big political or social back story to the fight.  What are we really fighting for?  There's combat in space, on the ground, and in the political or business arena.  Most space opera sits in this one such as David Weber's Harrington series, Mike Shepard's Kris Longknife series, and Peter F. Hamilton's works (e.g. Reality Dysfunction).
At the end of the day, I'm more about flavours 2 and 3 as I think there is a richer story to be told.  Science fiction is about wonder and the what if questions about political, technological, and cultural change.  I love to see a good shootout in space or on the ground, but I'm not necessarily only reading a memoir about combat in Gulf War XVII, or Planet Vietnam 42.  I'd also like to see more hope instead of dystopian outcomes too. I've also noticed that a great deal of combat oriented military SF isn't futuristic enough, and it actually distracts me, because I feel like I'm seeing a rehash of the Gulf War or Vietnam.
 
Observations About Mecha Anime
For non-anime fans out there I'm just going to say that anime / manga is a big genre that ranges from mysteries, romance, historicals, all the way to SF.  It isn't just for kids and teenagers, but much of it is oriented at the youth market.  In Japan, it is huge, and the closest thing to it in North America is the young adult fiction genre that sells really well right now too.  Often the stories are simpler, but they have appeal, and are not over encumbered with a ton of story baggage.  There is plenty of good anime science fiction and in fact, the Japanese are often better at futuristic depictions than our own television and movie industries (although this maybe changing with the current generation of shows and movies).  As for mecha anime, this is a fairly popular sub-genre, and it has mainstream support in Japan, but not worldwide.

Mecha anime flavours.
  1. Big robots / giant mecha.  You've all heard about this trope that is comprised of the Iron Giant, Mazinger, Pacific Rim, Neon Genesis Evangelion, Getter Robo, Gunbuster, etc.  This is the super robot category where the pilots tend to be hot blooded, call out their robot's signature attacks like a Hong Kong action flick, and the robots are super-awesome with amazing powers and abilities.  Who wouldn't want to drive a giant robot?
  2. Real robot.  This is the more realistic type of robot that is not usually at large as the giant robot, but still big, and they behave more like real machines.  Macross, Gunparade, Full Metal Panic, Gundam all fall in this category.  Still about the robots, but with a wider range of stories.
  3. Futuristic anime with  robots.  This is often just science fiction anime.  This is the future where man and machine work together and it could be more like a technothriller.  Shows like Ghost in the Shell, Gundam 00 (this one is a real robot, but the story begged to be in this category), Patlabor, Bubblegum Crisis, Votoms, Burst Angel, Yukikaze (coming soon with Tom Cruise), Appleseed, etc.
There are quite a few mecha anime being produced right now after a bit of drought and I favour categories 2 and 3 again.  I like robots (even if they are taking away all of the repetitive jobs) and think we're going to have to live with them one way or another.  Humanoid robots are fragile by nature with high mobility, but they have too many weak spots like limbs, joints, heads.  If humanoid robots are to exist, they need to be cost effective so $50,000 anti-tank missile doesn't take down a $100,000,000 robot - something that we can't realize with near future technology.  I'm a realist when it comes to war, but I still like giant robots, so I needed to address these issues in my writing for Exocrisis Blue.  You can't really dodge laser blasts, but wouldn't it be fun to do so!

Some additional reading about Anime SF / Mecha Anime:
Conclusion
Now that I have discussed the two types of genres that I'm writing under you can see that there is commonality in the 3rd category between mecha anime and military SF where the stories tend to be broader and can appeal to a wider audience.  I don't think there is a great deal of crossover in audiences though.  You tend to be in one camp and never see the other as far as I can tell - maybe not enough press or something.  This is the same idea as serious literature folk not reading SF, but with less of a gulf.  However, these sub-genres tend to have avid fans too, so I don't think there is a great deal of general support for something outside type of story you like based on what I've read or seen.  I'm hoping my stories appeal to a wide fan base myself as I've enjoyed both types of genres and hopefully I've shed a bit of light on this subject so others do too if they do not already do so.

Resources for Military SF


 

Sunday, 10 February 2013

Neo-Ace Academy Emblem For Exocrisis Blue

I'm still working away at this in real time and February has proven to be a very busy month due to work, some travel happening, and the fact I'm going to promote Exocrisis at Soba Bowl in March too.  Just writing a star chamberish scene right now and did some work on the emblem for the Neo-Ace academy.

Neo-Ace is the first of two or three short novels (longer than a novella but on the short end for a novel).  It basically continues the story from where HARM and Raid on Kahamba left off at a mecha academy and research facility.  Joshua Scott, the mecha pilot from these stories is now a Major and a quintuple ace.  At the special request of Janet Chan, the inventor of the HARM unit, he has agreed to transfer from regular service to train the next generation of super-mecha pilots.  The story just moves on from there.

Neo-Ace Mecha Academy From Exocrisis Blue
Here is a brief excerpt from Scene two with the trainees.

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"Well, they're not breaking through here to Central City," Jake responded.  "If we take these guys out, we know they won't be back.  We have the initiative and should take it."

Jake looked at the tactical display again.  He projected the map for everyone to see and used his finger to point out a position.  "We won't move that far out of position if we can take them out before they exit the valley between these two hills. Geraldo, Mayumi, take the left flanking hill.  Bing and Toshi, take the right hill.  Mary and I will pursue and keep the pressure on.  You guys run for those hills and take them out from above."

"The plan sounds good to me,"  Geraldo spoke out in accented English, his mixed Hispanic heritage coming through.  "We should take advantage of the situation."

"I'm in," Mary added.  She preferred a standup fight over waiting any day.  "Eliminated Newts won't be back."

After bit of hesitation, Bing, assented too.

Mayumi finally agreed when it was obvious that everyone was in.  "Okay," she quietly added.

"I don't think we should be doing this," Toshi finally agreed, "but let us try it."

"Thanks, Toshi.  All units, move out," Jake ordered.  They were going to win this one in a big way.
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Wednesday, 9 January 2013

Exocrisis Blue - Neo-Ace - Chapter 1 Draft Preview

This brief preview from the beginning of Exocrisis Blue - Neo-Ace introduces one of the key characters, mecha pilot cadet Mayumi Shimizu. I'm still aiming to complete Neo-Ace in the first half of 2013, so stay tuned for more.  Previous installments in Exocrisis Blue are HARM, followed by Raid on Kahamba (these are available on Amazon via this link).

Neo-Ace Scene 01 - Tokyo - Draft Preview
Shadows faded into twilight darkness.  It was the beginning of night in Tokyo.  The brilliant lights of the city and its famous holographic billboards and video displays repelled the darkness. Moving parades of giant fantastical beasts, anime heroes battling villains, and flashy advertisements were  suspended over the streets around its busy train stations and popular locations like Shinjuku, Shibuya, and Ginza.  Sounds of music and catchy advertising jingles filled the air with a cacophony of sound.  Up close, augmented reality glasses and mini holo-projectors could show specific ads to people who had enabled their personal location identifiers.

Overlooking the vibrant city was the recently constructed Tokyo World Tree that also had the nickname of Yggdrasil.  Yggdrasil was the tree that reached into the heavens and deep into the earth from Norse mythology.  It embodied the hopes of Tokyoites for the rebirth of their city onto the world scene after the destruction wrought by the Alien War and the subsequent Kanto earthquake that had capped it off.   World Tree was about half of the height of Mount Fuji, the tallest point in Japan.  At a height of 1600 metres it was built to be bigger and taller than any free standing tower built by man, including the previous record holder, the Tokyo Skytree.  Only the advanced materials technology developed during the Alien War allowed it to exist and withstand both massive earthquakes or typhoons.  It was so tall that it received both an earlier sunrise before the rest of the city and a delayed sunset at the top.  The only structures taller than it were the orbital elevators that reached into orbit from the mountains of Peru,  Mount Ararat in Turkey, and Mauna Kea in Hawaii.

An external elevator car rapidly rose out of the tower’s massive base footings and began ascending to the observation decks that were just below the canopy that crowned the tower.  The elevator was a silvery speck that on the brightly lit surface of the tower whose built-in lighting subtly shifted in color over time.   Twelve main struts fanning out in all directions comprised the main canopy structure at the top.  Each strut in turn had extendable micro-struts which would become the branches and leaves of the great World Tree.  In the day, it was a glittering silver and gold canopy.  At night, the built-in holo-projectors  turned the canopy into a brilliant lightshow that had played animations for everyone to see. 

Mayumi Shimizu and Hiro, her godfather, rode the glass walled elevator up with two dozen other excited people.  The passengers were a diverse lot that ranged from grandmothers in kimonos, families with children, dating couples to obvious tourists from other countries.  The World Tree had just been open for a year and a half, but it still drew large crowds of every day.  Ceiling mounted displays on the inner walls of the elevator showed their rising position and facts about the tower as they climbed.  Mayumi ignored the displays and had her face pressed against the glass to get the most of the breathtaking view while the less bold were well back from the glass.  She could almost imagine she was flying in the dimly lit elevator.   Next to her, Hiro just observed her happiness and was content with that fact as he contemplated the view himself.  Most of the landscape below had lights in it except where there were parks, but he knew that some of the dark patches were still rubble that had not been cleared.  Tokyo had been rebuilt again, for the third time in 200 years, but it would still be a few years before it was fully redeveloped. 

The elevator eventually arrived at the first observation deck.  A number of the passengers disembarked, a few new ones boarded, and the elevator did a brief rise to the second observation deck.  All of the passengers excitedly walked off onto a wide gallery that circled the tower.  The gallery was fully enclosed with large floor to ceiling windows that offered spectacular panoramic views of the city.   At this altitude a full enclosure was necessary to protect people from the weather as the  winds could be high, the temperature was cooler, and you could even be in the weather as you were in or above the rainclouds.
Tokyo at night from the Skytree.   Flickr / edocko777
“We are not due for our dinner reservations until 7:30.” Hiro spoke out.  “We have about 25 minutes to enjoy the sights.   I believe the holographic representation of the old skyline is about to light up in 10 minutes.  I have never been up here myself so I would like to see it.”  He then worked his jaw to pop his ears due to the lower air pressure at their height.

“You like history too much, ojisan!” Mayumi called back.  She was very fond of her godfather and called him ojisan, for uncle, a term of endearment that she used from before the death of her parents.  Running to the huge windows she looked out over the city again.  “The city lights are beautiful, it is like a sea of lights in all directions.  Look you can even see the grounds of the Imperial Palace there.  The entire castle is all lit up!” 

Mayumi lived with her aunt’s family, who was her mother’s sister, but had always felt a little like an outsider.  For twelve years they had taken care of her since the death of her parents in a terrible car accident, but they cared for their own three children more than her.  It wasn’t like they didn’t love her or neglected her, but she felt they just didn’t have enough love to spread around to the extra child they had never expected.   On the other hand, Hiro, had always managed to pop in every month to visit her  despite his busy schedule.  He was a senior sales executive who traveled the globe for Galáxia Japão Pharmaceuticals (GJP),  a large Brazillian and Japanese company that kept him on the move.  She had known him since she was three and he had played an even more important role in her life after the deaths of her parents.  However, she never called him ojisan when her actual aunt and uncle were around as it would have caused problems.

Mayumi returned back to Hiro when she realized that he had not come up to the window and was just staring out.  She stood against him and gently held onto his arm.  Mayumi was not tall and she easily put her head onto his chest for comfort.  Hiro was about 5' 10" and her head only came up to his shoulders.
"I'm sorry," Hiro murmured out.  "I'm ruining the day for you.  This was supposed to be your happy, belated birthday from me."

Mayumi snapped her head up.  "That's ridiculous.  You just being here makes me happy!  You came back early from Rio just for me."

Hiro smiled.  "I just have many things on my mind.  I cannot believe you have turned fifteen and have turned into a beautiful young woman.  It seems like yesterday that were still piggybacking on my shoulders at the zoo."

"That was a long time ago, ojisan."

"I know, but humour an old man and his memories.  I am very proud about how you turned out.  You would have made your mother and father very proud too."

"You are going to make me sad if you keep this up."

"I know.  I know, but bear with me just a little longer, then we will talk about happy things.  I just want to talk about your future."

Mayumi gave the slighted of frowns then nodded in agreement. 

"You have done well in school and scored at the top for the national mecha synchronization tests.  That is a remarkable achievement that gives you automatic entry into the Japanese Defence Forces Mecha Academy.  I'm glad you chose to attend the CAJUN Neo-Ace Academy instead when they offered you a spot.  But... I was a little surprised as it is a big move for you."

"I surprised myself, ojisan." Mayumi replied.  "I wasn't sure at first, but then I talked about it with my friends and they thought it could be a big opportunity.  How many chances like this does a person get in their life?  It would be a grand adventure." 


"You have become strong," Hiro spoke affirmatively.  "I would have told you to go too."  He then paused for a moment.  "Your adopted parents were very concerned about you moving to Canada on your own, but I convinced them that it would be fine, as it was very prestigious.  After all, you would be going to school and training with the best student pilots from Japan, Canada, and Pacifica.  The Union would not want their best to come to harm."

"I knew I could count on you, ojisan."  Mayumi had guessed her uncle had something to do with the sudden change of mind from her uncle and aunt. "They really respect you, and I'm glad you changed their minds." Mayumi was positively radiant with the news of her uncle's support.  "You have always been the best for me!"

Hiro looked her in the eyes.  “It was not easy, “ he added in a serious tone.  “Your aunt was really worried about you.  Remember when you use to have the terrible dreams about the world ending.  I know you think they don’t love you as much as their own children, but I remember how desperate they were when their own doctors could not help you.  Their doctors said it was just the trauma from the loss of your parents.  I finally put them in contact with the right specialist who helped the dreams stop.  I hope you appreciate them.  I know I do.”

Mayumi’s exuberance calmed down.  “I know, ojisan.  I’m going to miss my family here, my friends, and Japan.  This is going to be serious training as I will be a soldier.”

“I’m glad you understand.  They have done a fine job of raising you.  And I think you will do just fine in Canada.  Your English is good and you will make new friends.”

She gave him a great big hug.  Hiro affectionately returned an equally big hug, but a part of his heart was heavy with doubt.  Only his real love for Mayumi showed on the surface though.  He had watched over the child for a long time and hoped he was doing the right thing.  The academy would be good for her talents, but it would put her on a path to danger.

Both of them enjoyed the long hug before Hiro finally spoke out.  "Let's get a good view for the illuminations.  It will probably be very crowded.  Remember, I still have a birthday present for you too! I think you will really like it!"

Mayumi was just all smiles.  It was something that Hiro wanted to remember forever.

*****

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The Combat Mechas of HARM


For more information about the Exocrisis Blue books and HARM click here.
HARM is short for Humanoid Assault and Reconnaissance Machine

These are giant bipedal robots that vaguely resemble a medieval knight with its thick torso, massive joints, blocky armour plates, and a squat helmet with a horizontal slit on top.  HARM units have been developed in a range of sizes for different purposes and range from 3 to 15 metres in height.  The main combat HARM units are on the large end of the scale since they need to carry a chemical fusion plant to generate the massive amounts of power for required for their coilgun primary armament and to energize their molecular armour plating.

HARM units are far more nimble than their appearance would dictate as they are powered by synthetic muscles that generate massive amounts of physical force with an almost instantaneous response.  However, effective use of this agility and strength derived from the advanced cybernetic control and full motion capture interfaces for the human pilot of the robot.  These systems are composed of a cybernetic 3D display helmet and the motion capture suit worn by the pilot.  The tight-fitting suit is plugged into a skeletal support frame that provides both physical support for the human operator and force-feedback to show how the machine is responding to commands.  The cybernetic interfaces read the pilot’s mind to enhance the motion capture control of the robot to a new level.

The cockpits for the machines are typically 8 to 10 metres off the ground, but human control is enabled via VR and augmented reality displays shown from the perspective of the robot’s head. When you first pilot a HARM you have to adjust to the disorienting size perspective and the actual capabilities and limitations of the machine. Pilots have indicated they felt like they were wearing the giant machines in a manner similar to how battlesuit infantry felt when they were wearing their powered exoskeletons.

Manual backups to operate the machine also exist but these could just make it walk and work its arms in the simplest manner.  Every HARM unit has an advanced Artificial Intelligence (AI) to act as a co-pilot, weapons and engineering officer.  A pilot could actually verbally command an AI to move a HARM unit, however, safety mechanisms have been built into HARM units to prevent the AI from operating on its own without human supervision.

General Automata Corporation Developed HARM Units
GAC is the world leader in military HARM development and commercial construction mechas. Under the leadership of Dr. Janet Chan it continues to excel in R & D.
X Series HARM Unit
X Series Experimental HARM Unit
The first operational HARM unit that entered combat was the X-14 numbered version of the X series.  This series of HARM units was not intended for production use as it was intended to be a functional prototyping only.

                    Date of Introduction Into Service: 2050
                    Height: 13 metres
                    Weight: 30 metric tons
                    Max Running Speed: 70 kph loaded, 80 kph unloaded.
                    Rocket Jump: 20 metres up.
                    Armament:
o   50 mm coilgun integrated into the right arm.  Cannon fires hypersonic, fin stabilized, depleted uranium penetrators. Single shot mode is the most powerful mode for the gun, but it takes 10 seconds before the capacitors can recharge for the next shot. A great deal of power is required for the superconducting magnetic coils to propel their projectiles at 3 km/second. Because of the power requirement only heavy tanks and HARM units are equipped with them.
o   30 mm automatic cannon integrated into left arm.
o   Unit can engaged in hand to hand combat by picking up objects or by punching.
                    Defences: Active molecular armour plating, and duralloy composite plating.
                    Electronics:
o   Full electronics suite including military comnet, EW, Radar, Infrared Vision, and advanced datalink.
o   Prototype Delphi series AI.
o   Reconnaissance drone

Mark I Series Avenger HARM Unit
First mass produced HARM unit that is still found in service in a few places on the globe.  The Mark I series was a universal frame that has been modified and extended by other nations since the design was shared so that every nation could construct HARM units to counter the Blue Newt invasion.  Performance characteristics and armament are similar to the X Series.  These units are no longer in service with Canada, Pacifica, and Japan.

Mark II Series Thor HARM Unit
This is the first General Automata Corporation specific HARM unit.  These Mark II series HARM units are a reengineered design that extends the Mark I series.  Mark II HARM units are only found in service with reserve units for Canada, Pacifica, and Japan now.  Other nations have HARM units similar in capability to the Thor series units.

Mark III Series Fenrir HARM Unit
The first completely reengineered HARM unit from the ground up.  The design from GAC was far superior to all other HARM designs that it seemed to leap a generation ahead of all other nations.  The units first entered service with CAJUN rapid deployment forces, then with the armed forces of  Canada, Pacifica, and Japan.

                    Date of Introduction Into Service: 2060
                    Height: 12 metres
                    Weight: 30 metric tons, 34 metric tons with full combat load.
                    Max Running Speed: 70 kph loaded, 80 kph unloaded.
                    Rocket Jump: 20 metres up.
                    Armament:
·                     The primary armament is now interchangeable.  The unit can carry either a 50 mm coilgun for anti-armour use or a 160 mm assault cannon that can fire a variety of rounds.  The coilgun can be clipped onto the HARM’s back if missile pods are not mounted.  The coilgun has been improved for both rate of fire (one full power shot every 4 seconds) and to fire projectiles at a maximum of 3.5 km/s or mach 10+.
·                     Typhoon missile pods.  Two disposable missile pods can be mounted per HARM, with 16 heavy missiles per pod.
·                     Mono-steel molecular combat knife in a mounted in a horizontal sheath at the base of the HARM units back.
·                     30 mm chain gun integrated into left arm with a switchable mix of 200 rounds of HE and 200 rounds of AP.
·                     20 Helldart anti-armour missiles in a shoulder-mounted vertical launch system.
                    Defences: Active molecular armour plating and improved duralloy composite plating, active camouflage system, smoke canisters, and Hedgehog point defence system.
                    Electronics:
·                     Full electronics suite including military comnet, EW, Radar, Infrared Vision, enhanced optics, and advanced datalink.
·                     Oracle series AI that is three times more capable than the old Delphi series.
·                     Reconnaissance drone

Mark IV Series Odin HARM Unit.
Classified and currently under development at the GAC development and test facility in Edmonton, Alberta, Canada.  According to GlobalMechWatchers.org there are rumours of a flight mode and advanced beam weaponry being developed.

Date Under Development: 2067

Read about the HARM units in action in the ebooks HARM, and Raid on Kahamba available at Amazon in most regions. Coming in 2013 is the main story arc for Exocrisis Blue that integrates HARM units into a story of mecha academy recruits and veteran pilots in a backdrop of global intrigue and war.