Saturday, 28 September 2013

Nemesis. A Review of a Western Kaiju (Monster) Novel.

Mini-review #13
This is a series of short reviews for military SF and mecha SF.  You will not see a review of something I don't like as it isn't worth writing about in that case, but I will tell you what works for me and what doesn't about the stories I did like.  

Not exactly a military SF book, but the military does show up!  Nemesis is a recent novel by Jeremy Robinson, the author of the Chess Team technothriller/thriller novels.  This novel is his homage to the giant monster destroying the countryside phenomena made popular by the Japanese Kaiju (monster) movies like Godzilla.  There have always been giant monster movies and such over here (Cloverfield anyone?), but not so many books, so I was pretty interested to see what he wrote.
No spoilers ahead.  The book starts with an unexpected discovery in Alaska by the military.  A man is murdered and I almost stopped reading at that point in chapter 1.  I wasn't too impressed by the opening and was wondering how the rest of the book was going to stack up with sub plots after this.  Anyhow, I kept reading and the story did pick up.  This is a giant monster story intertwined with some illegal genetics research, really bad black ops types, and a nasty villain.  It does have the reading flavour of the typical technothriller / action novel, especially in the last two thirds of the book, and you'll like the military scenes too.  The monster itself is pretty imaginative and it is definitely not your black and white monster as it "Nemesis" has it's own character.

Mr. Robinson has written a pretty fun story, and while the ending is kind of typical of "Western" monster and horror movies, it was a fun ride.  If you like monster stories or even technothrillers, give this one a read.


Does it have a cast of characters listing? 
Nope.  There are really two main characters with Jon Hudson of the Department of Homeland Security and Sheriff Collins, a real tough lady who can do hand to hand and use a machinegun.  There are plenty of other characters, but nothing that will confuse you.

What is the scope / scale of the story? 
The scope of the story really focuses on the two main character and the monster.  The monster scenes with the characters are well done and bring an element of interaction to the monster epic you don't usually get.  The monster grows and the more military elements are drawn in.  The response by the military is kind of disorganized though and plenty of losses ensue.

Does it have likeable characters?
Jon is a likeable, down to earth character, who basically runs a teeny little X-files type operation.  Lots of eccentric supporting characters due to the nature of the homeland security unit they work for.  Many poor smucks dying, getting eaten, and getting squished.

Does it have an entertaining storyline?
Yes.The story starts slow, but the action picks up after the first quarter of the book.  The action grows as the monster grows.  The story integrates the characters well into the narrative which could have been lost as the monster could have taken over the story completely.

How is the internal consistency / plausibility?
I liked the story as a fun monster crushes city kind of story.  The biology is pretty amazing, probably not very likely, especially with the growth rates, monster abilities, and such, but you forgive these things as it is a monster movie in written form.  The military response is a little poor, but even my favourite giant robot movie like Pacific Rim had these WTF moments.  Still a fun read though.
  • A-10 Warthog engaging with 30mm gun vulcan that fires depleted uranium rounds that should have punch clean through the beasty in the early stages.
  • AMRAAM missiles are really air to air weapons and not for punching through armoured hides even if they have a 60 lb explosive warhead.  Hey, they used the same mistake in the Independence Day movie and I liked that too!
  • Tomahawk missiles seemed underpowered.
  • F-22s closing in tight to use guns.  Are you kidding me!  But it looks cool.
  • Apache gunships do not use mini-guns/vulcans.  They have 25 mm chain guns and don't need to come closer than a kilometre or two to engage you with cannon or Hellfire anti-tank missiles.
What cool bonus features are there?
The monster is cool.  Just read it to find out more.


Mechas That Fly In The New Chapter of Neo Ace

Chapter 20 of Neo-Ace is now up at Wattpad
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Everythings been a blur.  Busy days that feel like this picture.

I chose to finish off Chapter 27 this week which is a mecha chapter before flipping back to the developments happening in the GAC lab.  The action is running hot right now and it'll be like that for awhile.  A yes, the guinea pig and a little girl are going to play an important role in the next few chapters.

I bought an image over at Shutterstock and am now using it in conjunction with some line art I produced for the Neo Ace cover.  I think this will likely be the final cover image and you can see it over at Wattpad for now.

Writing Technique Note
Some people recommend pretty linear thinking for their writing.  I kind of multitask as I get bored of doing one thing all the time.  Sometimes I'm thinking about the title, the cover, or even another writing idea.  It never hurts to outline ahead either (you are prototyping).  You have to keep a focus so the work get done, but I have found that removal of risk is the best thing you can do first.  This means you should know the ending you want to write so you know what you need to do to arrive at it.  Anything that is difficult should be overcome so you know you don't have to waste time at the roadblock later or find yourself painted into a corner.  If this was a technical project that roadblock could make or break you later as you have built the wrong components or infrastructure.



Saturday, 21 September 2013

The Kaiju Rising Kickstarter and I've Posted Chapter 19 of Neo Ace

Chapter 19 of Neo-Ace is now up at Wattpad
The plot thickens so to speak.  The story is now set to race ahead towards the conclusion of the first book.  I'm going to be writing Chapter 27 or 28 today depending on which plot thread I want to follow up on.
Have a read for free on Wattpad and let me know if you like it!  You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.  Also check out my books on Amazon at my publications page here.


I'm also looking at some cover art related materials at Shutterstock for Neo Ace and also at images related to Japan to supplement the ones I personally took for another ebook project.  There's a sale on at Shutterstock so I may as well take a look this weekend.

I originally wanted to try and get a more professional cover done, but it didn't work out with the artist I originally contacted.  Next time I talk to someone, it'll be like a housing contractor where the estimate is up front as it is a waste of time otherwise.  I may still use some freelance services from Elance or Crowdspring, but time will tell.  A cover over there can range from $200 to $500+ depending on who and what you want.  Have to sell a lot of books to make up for an investment like that.  I've sold several hundred, but it doesn't translate into many dollars at 99 cents minus the Amazon commission.

Kaiju Rising Kickstarter
I'm pretty excited to see this anthology of giant monster stories get funded.  They hit their base goal in 12 day and are now going for their stretch goals.  You wouldn't see anything like this normally so if you like big robots, you might also like big monsters, so pay them a visit!  I've backed them and I'll be waiting for my ebook in the email!

http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1089607742/kaiju-rising-age-of-monsters-anthology

They have 240+ backers, but that still isn't a huge number, so I might definitely be writing in the wrong genre if I'm looking for higher volume sales like in romance, mystery, or even mainstream sci fi.  I'll finish my books as they are something I wanted to do, and then there will be other projects that will be just as fun to do!






Saturday, 14 September 2013

Odin Class Mechs Used in Battle By Cadets

Chapter 18 of Neo-Ace is now up at Wattpad.  The cadets are finally training on the mechas that their PRECOG systems are designed to take full advantage of.  More of Mayumi's abilities become apparent and these new Odin class mechas are being utilized to their full potential.

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Power Rangers Super Sentai Giant Robot Toy seen at the toy store.  All the way over here from Japan.

It's a beautiful fall afternoon and after a little yardwork I'm back to writing up Chapter 26.  I can see the end of the novel within 10 chapters!  I'm looking forward to finishing this work and beginning the detailed outline for the sequel novel where the action really heats up in a global high-stakes game.  This first novel has a solid ending though that completes the first arc.  The second arc basically builds on it, but I won't leave the reader hanging at the end of Neo-Ace.

Saturday, 7 September 2013

Odin Class HARM Units Are Introduced in Chapter 17

This chapter introduces the Odin Class HARM unit, the latest model from General Automata Corporation.  These battlefield robots were built with the cadets in mind as they incorporate the PRECOG system that utilizes their full personal potential. 

Have a read for free on Wattpad and let me know if you like it!  You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.  Also check out my books on Amazon at my publications page here.

Monday, 2 September 2013

More revelations about Mayumi's past and Disrupting Class. Neo-Ace Chapter 16 posted at Wattpad.

It's been a busy week and the last long weekend of summer was pretty nice in Alberta.  I managed to complete a bunch of chapters last week.  Chapter 16 is now up on Wattpad.  In this chapter, Mayumi learns more about her past from her uncle Hiro who has hidden secrets from her for whole life.  What is Mayumi?  How will she react?

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3D Wire Head In Front of the Bow in Calgary

School starts tomorrow for the kids and I stopped to wonder what education would be like in 20 years.  Will they go to school or does everyone virtual conference in?  Are there physical schools?  What will teaching and learning be like?  How will social skills be developed?  What would be the big influences of technology be?  How will kids be graded or evaluated.

I have ideas about how this will shape up myself as I work in the education arena, but I'm not a teacher.  I kind of suspect that teachers will be more facilitators and mentors than the regular teacher myself because the education system hasn't really changed since the industrial revolution.  It it also an area where the introduction of expensive technology brings marginal gains.  For a few percentage points of improvement or less, the cost of education goes up every year and it is because of increasing salaries and misuse of tech.  This means that it is ripe for disruptive innovation and change once the dam breaks on government regulation and parental conservatism. The introduction of tech in most areas of business mean increased productivity and cost reductions, something that hasn't happened yet. I'm vague on this area in my story as predicting the future is for fortune tellers.  I just know AIs will be a big disruptor as having a personal tutor must work wonders.

Have a look for yourself here with this book "Disrupting Class" for more info if you are interested. Clayton Christensen is an MIT professor.  There are also presentations on Ted Talks.  Look up disrupting education or disruptive innovation.


Saturday, 24 August 2013

Neo Ace Chapter 15 Released. Cadets Have Time Off in Banff.

I just posted chapter 15, the customary hot springs episode if this was a Japanese anime, up at Wattpad.  I thought I would throw in a nice Rocky Mountains twist and let the story wind down a bit from the big battle in Chapter 14.  I'm hoping to crank a few extra chapter out in the next few weeks to set up for the end of the novel.  Been really busy at work and that just sucks the life out of story writing if you've been writing at work all day too.
Lake Louise in Banff National Park

I've been incorporating little slices of Alberta into the Neo-Ace story as the mecha academy is set primarily in a future version of Edmonton.  The next story that builds on it will be international in scope, but for now I've written about a future cityscape with bullet trains connecting Edmonton to Calgary, and even an updated Banff.


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Saturday, 17 August 2013

Neo-Ace Chapter 14 - Fortress Assault is Published and Edmonton Animethon

Chapter 14 of Neo-Ace was just released.  I've setup a massive fortress assault with mechs and plenty of high-tech weaponry.  This was a big chapter to write.  Have a read for free on Wattpad and let me know if you like it!  You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.

When I'm visiting Tokyo it is always kind of fun to see all of the anime pop culture elements shown on posters and signs everywhere.  On the LRT awhile back, I saw this poster for Animethon in Edmonton, which is Canada's longest running anime convention, celebrating 20 years.  Wow.  Twenty years of anime conventions that spanned a media timeline from bootleg VHS (pre-internet) ripoffs of shows you couldn't see here to the DVD boom and bust, to Internet fansubs and piracy, and finally legit viewing sites like Crunchyroll.  Anime has come a long way in the overseas markets.

I always liked mechas, and Pacific Rim is going to get the genre some new fans, but I have to admit that I wasn't all that into ten years ago.  Mechas are not really all that realistic as they probably can't maneuver the way you see in anime and take the punishment that they do.  But they are fun and big and who doesn't want to pilot one as I've said before?  To me it is a genre that is like scifi fantasy, and I watch it for pure entertainment.  In my writing for Neo-Ace I've tried to up the realism as I'm a military buff that does recognize the shortcomings of actual mechs in combat and I've tried to address some of these things.  Have a read of Chapter 14 at Wattpad for free and see if I've succeeded.

You can hit the Wattpad link here to read Neo-Ace Academy for free.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.

I also have two published shorts on Amazon titled HARM and Raid on Kahamba if you want more.  Neo-Ace will be published on Amazon late this year.



Monday, 5 August 2013

Neo-Ace Chapter 13 Now Available At Wattpad

I've posted Chapter 13 up at Wattpad.  I'm developing the character of Dr. Janet Chan some more.  Who wouldn't want to know more about the woman who designed the first HARM units during the Alien War!  I can feel the tempo of the story picking up and it'll be mostly action writing from now on.  You can hit the Wattpad link here to read Neo-Ace Academy for free.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.

Griz!  I was backing away at this point to get back to the car.  Big claws.
Chocolate Bear Claws - much more friendly!
It's been a busy July and the August long weekend is here.  I managed to finish one short chapter and start another over the weekend.  July was fun with activities like the Calgary Stampede, Taste of Edmonton, a very nice dinner out at Vivo, the premier of Pacific Rim (which was an awesome giant robot movie), and a trip out to Jasper in the Rocky Mountains.  Out at Jasper I saw my second grizzly bear ever, so the only big animals I haven't seen this summer are like mountain lions and moose.  I saw a black bear earlier this year and had elk eating the flowers in front of our cabin at Pyramid Lake so it has been a pretty good year for wildlife.

Sunday, 28 July 2013

Review of the Star Carrier Series - Earth Strike, Center of Gravity, Singularity, and Deep Space

Mini-review #12
This is a series of short reviews for military SF and mecha SF.  You will not see a review of something I don't like as it isn't worth writing about in that case, but I will tell you what works for me and what doesn't about the stories I did like.  
Star Carrier is a well written series of space navy books by Ian Douglas who is actually William H. Keith.  The author has already written a few trilogies and has a list of writing credits a mile long so you know the guy has honed his craft.  People have described this series by relating it to Battlestar Galactica as there is a STAR CARRIER (wow, that was a shocker).  I would say that is where the similarities start and end myself as I liked this a heck of a lot more than the new Battlestar.  Earth and its colonies are under attack by multiple alien races working for the Sh'daar and is losing the war.  Colony after colony is being stripped away from us and Earth is the next target. The politicians and HQ hesitate on the next best move, but one man, Admiral Alexander Koenig, decides to take the fight to the aliens before they can mass and destroy us. 

The story focuses on the Admiral and one of the fighter pilots Trevor Gray.  You get the action from the fighter cockpit and from the bridge of the carrier so there is plenty of variety to read about.  Both of the characters develop over time and each has their own personal demons to overcome.

The stories move along fairly quickly and are good action reading.  The author does tend to go into explaining the tech a little too much and the battles with the capital ships tend to flow the same way.  A few naval battles have a strike fleet do a high speed flyby of an enemy fleet at near lightspeed and hammer them.  Basically an AI controlled drive by shooting with big railguns and other heavy weaponry.  The battles are well done, but tend to be standard with a few extra surprise moves.  I'll talk more about the fighters later on in the review and they are probably my favourite part of the series.

I highly recommend this series for anyone who likes reading about well thought out space combat and likes cheering on the human underdog.  And it is priced reasonably on the Kindle.

Does it have a cast of characters listing? 
No.  There are really two main characters, with maybe a half a dozen key supporting characters.  Action tends to center around the carrier America and its crew.  Fighter pilots tend to die a fair bit, but so do the capital ships with their nameless crew of hundreds.

What is the scope / scale of the story? 
I'd say the story is epic in scope with a fleet on a desperate mission within a larger galactic context.  There are many mysteries to the Sh'daar.  The naval engagements are between fleets of 50 to 100 ships with hundreds of fighters involved.

Does it have likeable characters?
Admiral Koenig is a brilliant strategist who needs to deal with both aliens and the idiotic government back on Earth.  The man is very likeable as a leader.  Gray is the outsider in Naval aviation.  He come from a primitive fringe in the US that rejects nanotech implants and big government.  A practical man, he puts up with constant ribbing from his squadron mates, and still saves the day.

Does it have an entertaining storyline?
Yes. It is pretty much one long thrill ride with breathers to do character development, political subterfuge, and world building.  It is a long campaign to save the Earth from aliens and itself.

How is the internal consistency / plausibility?
This was well done.  The setup for the story and the politics on Earth sounded real and not far fetched.  There is the main Confederation faction on Earth that also has dissent as it was really formed out of expedience and not a full desire by the various nation states to integrate.  By book 4 you will know what I mean.  The aliens are pretty cool with everything from gas bags to tentacled critters that are not humanoid and don't think like we do.  The tech is nicely done and the use of nanotech magic is consistently and usefully applied.  In fact, the Sh'daar are fighting us as they are worried about continual human development of  GRIN (Genetic, Robotic, Information, and Nano processes) that might enable us to have a Technological Singularity Event and transcend to something more powerful.

If there are any criticisms to level it would be with the chain of command and the aliens.  It seems like the politicians and naval admirals are idiots on Earth and the aliens are too predictable in their strategy.  This applies to all the books.

What cool bonus features are there?
The big ships are mushroom like in shape with big armoured domes of ice at the bow for fuel and protection.  The star fighters are very cool as they are pushed / pulled by micro-singularities to enable massive accelerations / decelerations in the tens of thousands of Gs.  They are made out of a nanomatrix hull that can change configuration for high speed, attack, and even atmospheric combat.  Nanotech implants in the pilots allow them to control many systems by touch and a thought.  I like the term "thought-clicking."

Ships fight at very high speeds and the tactics employed reflect this (e.g. shooting sand as a weapon). There are railguns, nuclear missiles, particle beams, kinetic gatling guns, and all types of energy weapons.

Finally, the three points I list below are not criticisms of this series, but are issues with most space combat SF.  Kudos to the author for describing the tech so well that I actually thought about these things.  The tech is sufficiently advanced in this series that I wonder:
  1. Why aren't the micro-singularities used as weapons (had a similar beef with the impenetrable drive fields in the Honor Harrington books).  Nothing stops a singularity missile that can rip through a capital ship's shields and armour and it's cheap. 
  2. Combat is sufficiently deadly that I wonder why large crews are still required for anything, and is even a single human pilot required to die in a star fighter when the AI and nanotech is so sophisticated.  They can assemble a starfighter in a supply ship in half a day and can nanofacture food and anything else (people?).
  3. How do you protect a planet from enemies who can hurtle projectiles at you at near lightspeed?  Big catastrophic, ecosystem ending event occurs next.  Stealth the big rocks and shoot thousands and thousands of them.  Who needs specialized bombardment ships to do this from orbit or even ship to ship combat?

Saturday, 27 July 2013

Neo-Ace Chapter 12 Posted at Wattpad (Amazon Field Trip)

Chapter 12 has been posted up at Wattpad.  We learn more about Blue Newt society and take a field trip deep into the Amazon to visit their colony.  You can hit the Wattpad link here to read Neo-Ace Academy for free.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.

It has been a pretty busy week of visiting the mountains and writing.  I was aiming to get three chapters done and I'm working on the third.  I'm finding that the writing is moving along and I'm looking forward to finishing the next few chapters so the action can pick up again as the end of the novel ends with a few bangs.

Over at Wattpad, I'm finding that it is pretty hard to find readers.  I've had a few good ones, but generally, there is a great deal of social networking going on with fanning and all that.  It takes too much effort away from the writing to pull off being popular so I'm going to let it sit.  Thanks to all the friends and the traffic being driven there from this blog and my other Tokyoexcess blog.


Friday, 26 July 2013

Pacific Rim Monsters and Mecha Inspires Fans and Critics

It has been a couple of weeks since the summer release of Pacific Rim.  I was pretty excited to go and see this kaiju versus mecha flick myself.  I'm writing science fiction with an anime inspired mecha focus (but with a more realistic military SF interpretation) so it had particular interest for me.  I came out of the movie thinking it was pretty darn good and would see it again.  Guillermo del Toro did not disappoint as he does a great job with the giant robots and monsters that just drags you willingly along for the ride.  I'll definitely get the Blu-ray and watch it again to see the details and things I missed on the first viewing as the world building was very rich.

More interestingly, the movie hasn't been the blockbuster they were hoping for in America, but it has done fairly well.  I suspect they will make a pile of money in Japan and China when it opens at the end of July.  In Korea it has been a big hit and I think it will continue to do well wherever Japanese anime and kaiju films like Godzilla have been part of the childhood culture.  My books probably need to be translated to Japanese, Korean, and Chinese :)

Best of all, you are seeing some good speculative buzz along with both critical and complimentary buzz in non-SF circles.  Places like Space.com, Scientific American blogs, and other sites have been running articles.  People have seen the movie and have been inspired to write about it from both the art, biology, and engineering sides.  This is good stuff.  I've linked to the articles below so you can see for yourself.  Most of them are pretty good and fun to read!

Friday, 19 July 2013

Edmonton As A Science Fiction Setting (Chapter 11 of Neo Ace Posted At Wattpad)

Neo-Ace is set in Edmonton, but mainly at the Neo-Ace Academy with the city in the background.  In this chapter I talk a little about the future history of the city during the Alien War.  The romance between Jake and Mayumi begins to blossom in the latest chapter and more is learned about Mayumi's special abilities.

You can hit the Wattpad link here to read Neo-Ace Academy.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.

I have to note that it wasn't too bad picking Edmonton as a setting for military SF.  Both Calgary and Edmonton have some cool futuristic attributes now in terms of urban design and development.  These cities are rapidly growing, but without the historical baggage of other major urban areas as they are young cities.
  1. There is a Canadian Forces Base here in the form of CFB Edmonton.
  2. Even Tom Clancy destroyed the High Level Bridge in this first volume of Endwar when Alberta gets invaded by Russians.  The Mounties put up a good fight along with the Alberta good old boys.
  3. Cold Lake is a big air force base and air gunnery range.
  4. Tons of training happens at Wainwright for maneuvers and war games.
  5. There are high tech research and industries here.
  6. Calgary and Edmonton are two big cities that could be linked by bullet train eventually.
  7. Light rail transit exists in both cities (same German manufacturer too) with the newer cars looking quite nice.
  8. Canada produces a great deal of science fiction in our authors and on TV / Film.  Just off the top of my head, Pacific Rim, X-Files, Stargate SG-1, Continuum, Defiance, Andromeda, etc.  Even the first Gundam pilot, Amuro Ray, was Canadian and so is Captain Kirk (in his alter ego of William Shatner). Heck, even the Wolverine was created in the Canadian Rockies and hid out in Alberta.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_science_fiction_TV_and_radio_shows_produced_in_Canada
What I changed.
  1. Calgary and Edmonton get attacked by the Newts and partially razed during the Alien War.
  2. I also destroyed the High Level Bridge (don't like it much anyways).  
  3. I moved GAC Headquarters and R&D from the southern USA to Edmonton to avoid the Newts who were very active in the States.  My first story HARM was set near Huntsville.
  4. Canada also breaks up with Quebec going its separate way.
  5. America breaks up into eastern and western factions after the death of the president due to Newt reprisal for destroying the mothership. True America (the eastern faction) absorbs the maritime provinces.
  6. Pacifica (Western America), Canada, and Japan form CAJUN as a common defence organization.
  7. I moved many American and Japanese refugees into Canada, bolstering the populations of Vancouver, Edmonton, Calgary, and more.
  8. The Mounties even intervene (Royal Canadian Mechanized Police?)
What I get to do.
  • Live fire exercises (coming up in Neo-Ace).
  • Mountain scenery.
  • Rebuild Edmonton in a more futuristic manner.
  • Add in a massive GAC mecha research centre, secret research labs and more.
  • Calgary Stampede setting.
  • Can even have a real hot springs setting for a scene.
  • Canadian setting that works.
  • Multicultural force in CAJUN and even the regular forces of all alliance nations.
  • Our prime minister is even a good one in the story.