Sunday, 28 July 2013

Review of the Star Carrier Series - Earth Strike, Center of Gravity, Singularity, and Deep Space

Mini-review #12
This is a series of short reviews for military SF and mecha SF.  You will not see a review of something I don't like as it isn't worth writing about in that case, but I will tell you what works for me and what doesn't about the stories I did like.  
Star Carrier is a well written series of space navy books by Ian Douglas who is actually William H. Keith.  The author has already written a few trilogies and has a list of writing credits a mile long so you know the guy has honed his craft.  People have described this series by relating it to Battlestar Galactica as there is a STAR CARRIER (wow, that was a shocker).  I would say that is where the similarities start and end myself as I liked this a heck of a lot more than the new Battlestar.  Earth and its colonies are under attack by multiple alien races working for the Sh'daar and is losing the war.  Colony after colony is being stripped away from us and Earth is the next target. The politicians and HQ hesitate on the next best move, but one man, Admiral Alexander Koenig, decides to take the fight to the aliens before they can mass and destroy us. 

The story focuses on the Admiral and one of the fighter pilots Trevor Gray.  You get the action from the fighter cockpit and from the bridge of the carrier so there is plenty of variety to read about.  Both of the characters develop over time and each has their own personal demons to overcome.

The stories move along fairly quickly and are good action reading.  The author does tend to go into explaining the tech a little too much and the battles with the capital ships tend to flow the same way.  A few naval battles have a strike fleet do a high speed flyby of an enemy fleet at near lightspeed and hammer them.  Basically an AI controlled drive by shooting with big railguns and other heavy weaponry.  The battles are well done, but tend to be standard with a few extra surprise moves.  I'll talk more about the fighters later on in the review and they are probably my favourite part of the series.

I highly recommend this series for anyone who likes reading about well thought out space combat and likes cheering on the human underdog.  And it is priced reasonably on the Kindle.

Does it have a cast of characters listing? 
No.  There are really two main characters, with maybe a half a dozen key supporting characters.  Action tends to center around the carrier America and its crew.  Fighter pilots tend to die a fair bit, but so do the capital ships with their nameless crew of hundreds.

What is the scope / scale of the story? 
I'd say the story is epic in scope with a fleet on a desperate mission within a larger galactic context.  There are many mysteries to the Sh'daar.  The naval engagements are between fleets of 50 to 100 ships with hundreds of fighters involved.

Does it have likeable characters?
Admiral Koenig is a brilliant strategist who needs to deal with both aliens and the idiotic government back on Earth.  The man is very likeable as a leader.  Gray is the outsider in Naval aviation.  He come from a primitive fringe in the US that rejects nanotech implants and big government.  A practical man, he puts up with constant ribbing from his squadron mates, and still saves the day.

Does it have an entertaining storyline?
Yes. It is pretty much one long thrill ride with breathers to do character development, political subterfuge, and world building.  It is a long campaign to save the Earth from aliens and itself.

How is the internal consistency / plausibility?
This was well done.  The setup for the story and the politics on Earth sounded real and not far fetched.  There is the main Confederation faction on Earth that also has dissent as it was really formed out of expedience and not a full desire by the various nation states to integrate.  By book 4 you will know what I mean.  The aliens are pretty cool with everything from gas bags to tentacled critters that are not humanoid and don't think like we do.  The tech is nicely done and the use of nanotech magic is consistently and usefully applied.  In fact, the Sh'daar are fighting us as they are worried about continual human development of  GRIN (Genetic, Robotic, Information, and Nano processes) that might enable us to have a Technological Singularity Event and transcend to something more powerful.

If there are any criticisms to level it would be with the chain of command and the aliens.  It seems like the politicians and naval admirals are idiots on Earth and the aliens are too predictable in their strategy.  This applies to all the books.

What cool bonus features are there?
The big ships are mushroom like in shape with big armoured domes of ice at the bow for fuel and protection.  The star fighters are very cool as they are pushed / pulled by micro-singularities to enable massive accelerations / decelerations in the tens of thousands of Gs.  They are made out of a nanomatrix hull that can change configuration for high speed, attack, and even atmospheric combat.  Nanotech implants in the pilots allow them to control many systems by touch and a thought.  I like the term "thought-clicking."

Ships fight at very high speeds and the tactics employed reflect this (e.g. shooting sand as a weapon). There are railguns, nuclear missiles, particle beams, kinetic gatling guns, and all types of energy weapons.

Finally, the three points I list below are not criticisms of this series, but are issues with most space combat SF.  Kudos to the author for describing the tech so well that I actually thought about these things.  The tech is sufficiently advanced in this series that I wonder:
  1. Why aren't the micro-singularities used as weapons (had a similar beef with the impenetrable drive fields in the Honor Harrington books).  Nothing stops a singularity missile that can rip through a capital ship's shields and armour and it's cheap. 
  2. Combat is sufficiently deadly that I wonder why large crews are still required for anything, and is even a single human pilot required to die in a star fighter when the AI and nanotech is so sophisticated.  They can assemble a starfighter in a supply ship in half a day and can nanofacture food and anything else (people?).
  3. How do you protect a planet from enemies who can hurtle projectiles at you at near lightspeed?  Big catastrophic, ecosystem ending event occurs next.  Stealth the big rocks and shoot thousands and thousands of them.  Who needs specialized bombardment ships to do this from orbit or even ship to ship combat?

Saturday, 27 July 2013

Neo-Ace Chapter 12 Posted at Wattpad (Amazon Field Trip)

Chapter 12 has been posted up at Wattpad.  We learn more about Blue Newt society and take a field trip deep into the Amazon to visit their colony.  You can hit the Wattpad link here to read Neo-Ace Academy for free.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.

It has been a pretty busy week of visiting the mountains and writing.  I was aiming to get three chapters done and I'm working on the third.  I'm finding that the writing is moving along and I'm looking forward to finishing the next few chapters so the action can pick up again as the end of the novel ends with a few bangs.

Over at Wattpad, I'm finding that it is pretty hard to find readers.  I've had a few good ones, but generally, there is a great deal of social networking going on with fanning and all that.  It takes too much effort away from the writing to pull off being popular so I'm going to let it sit.  Thanks to all the friends and the traffic being driven there from this blog and my other Tokyoexcess blog.


Friday, 26 July 2013

Pacific Rim Monsters and Mecha Inspires Fans and Critics

It has been a couple of weeks since the summer release of Pacific Rim.  I was pretty excited to go and see this kaiju versus mecha flick myself.  I'm writing science fiction with an anime inspired mecha focus (but with a more realistic military SF interpretation) so it had particular interest for me.  I came out of the movie thinking it was pretty darn good and would see it again.  Guillermo del Toro did not disappoint as he does a great job with the giant robots and monsters that just drags you willingly along for the ride.  I'll definitely get the Blu-ray and watch it again to see the details and things I missed on the first viewing as the world building was very rich.

More interestingly, the movie hasn't been the blockbuster they were hoping for in America, but it has done fairly well.  I suspect they will make a pile of money in Japan and China when it opens at the end of July.  In Korea it has been a big hit and I think it will continue to do well wherever Japanese anime and kaiju films like Godzilla have been part of the childhood culture.  My books probably need to be translated to Japanese, Korean, and Chinese :)

Best of all, you are seeing some good speculative buzz along with both critical and complimentary buzz in non-SF circles.  Places like Space.com, Scientific American blogs, and other sites have been running articles.  People have seen the movie and have been inspired to write about it from both the art, biology, and engineering sides.  This is good stuff.  I've linked to the articles below so you can see for yourself.  Most of them are pretty good and fun to read!

Friday, 19 July 2013

Edmonton As A Science Fiction Setting (Chapter 11 of Neo Ace Posted At Wattpad)

Neo-Ace is set in Edmonton, but mainly at the Neo-Ace Academy with the city in the background.  In this chapter I talk a little about the future history of the city during the Alien War.  The romance between Jake and Mayumi begins to blossom in the latest chapter and more is learned about Mayumi's special abilities.

You can hit the Wattpad link here to read Neo-Ace Academy.  If you like it please follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.

I have to note that it wasn't too bad picking Edmonton as a setting for military SF.  Both Calgary and Edmonton have some cool futuristic attributes now in terms of urban design and development.  These cities are rapidly growing, but without the historical baggage of other major urban areas as they are young cities.
  1. There is a Canadian Forces Base here in the form of CFB Edmonton.
  2. Even Tom Clancy destroyed the High Level Bridge in this first volume of Endwar when Alberta gets invaded by Russians.  The Mounties put up a good fight along with the Alberta good old boys.
  3. Cold Lake is a big air force base and air gunnery range.
  4. Tons of training happens at Wainwright for maneuvers and war games.
  5. There are high tech research and industries here.
  6. Calgary and Edmonton are two big cities that could be linked by bullet train eventually.
  7. Light rail transit exists in both cities (same German manufacturer too) with the newer cars looking quite nice.
  8. Canada produces a great deal of science fiction in our authors and on TV / Film.  Just off the top of my head, Pacific Rim, X-Files, Stargate SG-1, Continuum, Defiance, Andromeda, etc.  Even the first Gundam pilot, Amuro Ray, was Canadian and so is Captain Kirk (in his alter ego of William Shatner). Heck, even the Wolverine was created in the Canadian Rockies and hid out in Alberta.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_science_fiction_TV_and_radio_shows_produced_in_Canada
What I changed.
  1. Calgary and Edmonton get attacked by the Newts and partially razed during the Alien War.
  2. I also destroyed the High Level Bridge (don't like it much anyways).  
  3. I moved GAC Headquarters and R&D from the southern USA to Edmonton to avoid the Newts who were very active in the States.  My first story HARM was set near Huntsville.
  4. Canada also breaks up with Quebec going its separate way.
  5. America breaks up into eastern and western factions after the death of the president due to Newt reprisal for destroying the mothership. True America (the eastern faction) absorbs the maritime provinces.
  6. Pacifica (Western America), Canada, and Japan form CAJUN as a common defence organization.
  7. I moved many American and Japanese refugees into Canada, bolstering the populations of Vancouver, Edmonton, Calgary, and more.
  8. The Mounties even intervene (Royal Canadian Mechanized Police?)
What I get to do.
  • Live fire exercises (coming up in Neo-Ace).
  • Mountain scenery.
  • Rebuild Edmonton in a more futuristic manner.
  • Add in a massive GAC mecha research centre, secret research labs and more.
  • Calgary Stampede setting.
  • Can even have a real hot springs setting for a scene.
  • Canadian setting that works.
  • Multicultural force in CAJUN and even the regular forces of all alliance nations.
  • Our prime minister is even a good one in the story.

Saturday, 13 July 2013

Mayumi's Revelation - Chapter 10 of Neo Ace is Up at Wattpad

Focusing on character and plot development for the next few chapters.  The heroine Mayumi gets to explore her new powers more in this chapter.  An unexpected meeting happens and the buildup continues to the second half of the book.  I have the entire second half plotted now and it is going to be a roller coaster ride of action to the end.  Mecha vs mecha combat, scientists running for cover, nasty mercenary raiders attacking, hacking, and secrets will be revealed. You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.


Monday, 8 July 2013

Chapter 9 of Neo-Ace is up at Wattpad!

Just posted Chapter 9 of Neo-Ace up at Wattpad. What is the technology behind the amazing cadet performance in their mechas?  You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter. This writing should appeal to mecha fans of Gundam, Evangelion, and military SF fans who like writing with military academies and techno-thrillers.

Still working on Chapter 14, been a busy summer, but hoping to get it done this week if not tonight.

Sunday, 30 June 2013

Neo-Ace Update. Chapter 8 Mecha Action Now Up At Wattpad.

Just posted Chapter 8 of Neo-Ace up at Wattpad. The action picks up this week with intense mecha on mecha combat.  The cadets get a real tryout this time.  You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.  First really nice weekend this summer, maybe the second one, when I think really hard about it.  Going to start Chapter 14 this weekend and it'll be mostly action again so it'll be a nice break from all of the story development.  Interesting thing is that it looks like most of the last half of the story will be action.  Working with an artist to get mecha art done, but it is a slow process so far as this isn't a full time project for anyone.



Saturday, 22 June 2013

Neo-Ace Update. Chapter 7 now up at Wattpad.

Just a quick update today.  I just posted chapter 7 up at Wattpad and it continues the character development of the heroine.  Last couple of weeks have been pretty busy and I've been tired too so I'm just working again on Chapter 13 today and tomorrow.  You can hit the Wattpad link here.  If you like it follow me on Wattpad, Facebook or Twitter.  Up here in Edmonton the weather's been wet and cool, but nothing like our sister city 300km to the south.  Calgary was heavily flooded and a state of emergency has been declared.  The city centre was completely flooded to various degrees and I'm wondering how the Calgary Stampede Fair/Rodeo will go in a couple of weeks. 


Sunday, 2 June 2013

Musings About Writing, Military Science Fiction, and SF / Anime in General

I wasn't even planning on writing this post this morning, but it was raining and I didn't want to get electrofried replacing the front door light fixture.  Instead of this, I'm going to write about some observations about military SF and mecha anime I've noticed over the last couple of years.  I'll also highlight some military SF resources on the Internet that I think are valuable.

I've always liked science fiction and also like military SF.  I also used to to play war games that came with hundreds of cardboard counters on paper maps so I'm used to big fat rule books of minutia.  Having said that I did not realize how big of a gulf there is between the main SF genre and the military SF sub-genre AND the gulf between anime fans and mecha anime fans.  I kind of stepped into the middle of no mans land by trying to write good SF mecha stories with inspiration from mecha anime.  So I write in a grey area for two sub-genres and try to mix them.  Hmmm... Don't think I'm selling a million copies here, but it is something I want to finish just to tell a good story.

Two years ago I started blogging again (see Tokyo Excess for Japanese pop culture) and then started writing again with Exocrisis Blue six months later.  I've been somewhat successful with both endeavors, but I'm not giving up my day job any time soon as a business analyst:
  • My Tokyo Excess blog has about 450 page views a day right now, not tons, but not a little either.  I like Japanese pop culture and it is a good complementary mix with my other writing which is real military SF with an anime-inspired mecha element.
  • I've sold hundreds of copies of HARM and Raid on Kahamba, and gave away about fifteen hundred copies or so as promos.  I've been pretty explicit about it being military SF with mecha so people don't slam you for something they don't like (e.g. I don't like big robots or I thought this was a romance).
  • I'm also continuing the Exocrisis Bue story with two short novels about the Neo-Ace Academy to train the next generation of super mecha pilots.  I'm about halfway through the first novel right now, and you can see the draft of the novel at Wattpad here.  Follow me there if you want to show support for my writing.  The best place to follow me in general is on my twitter feeds.  I update the Tostzilla feed the most.
Observations About Military SF
Military SF is the writing of  David Drake (Hammer's Slammers), Keith Laumer (Bolo), David Weber (Honor Harrington), H.G. Wells (War of the Worlds), Heinlein (Starship Troopers), etc.  I'm not going into a detailed analysis, but it has to have a heavy military element obviously or focus on military operations.  You'll see that my categorization is broad is it starts to quickly includes more general SF after point 1 below too.

This genre comes in three main flavours to me:
  1. Combat oriented.  It is all about the fight, the men, the machines.  It's gritty, there's blood and circuits everywhere.  I'm fighting to just see tomorrow and the honour of the regiment.  I think many fans of the genre are in this boat.  Bolo falls in this category along with Hammer's Slammers.  The Star Carrier series is a recent one in this genre, along with The Lost Fleet series, but I think both of these entertaining series worked well as they were space naval with fleets and some politics, so not super small unit operations.
  2. Political / Social.  Military is mentioned, there might be a description about Operation So-and-So.  The main story is about power structures, machinations between political bodies and alien races, and it could be generational.  Grunts die, but that's war, lets focus on other things.  Foundation by Asimov is in this category.
  3. Combination.  There is a big political or social back story to the fight.  What are we really fighting for?  There's combat in space, on the ground, and in the political or business arena.  Most space opera sits in this one such as David Weber's Harrington series, Mike Shepard's Kris Longknife series, and Peter F. Hamilton's works (e.g. Reality Dysfunction).
At the end of the day, I'm more about flavours 2 and 3 as I think there is a richer story to be told.  Science fiction is about wonder and the what if questions about political, technological, and cultural change.  I love to see a good shootout in space or on the ground, but I'm not necessarily only reading a memoir about combat in Gulf War XVII, or Planet Vietnam 42.  I'd also like to see more hope instead of dystopian outcomes too. I've also noticed that a great deal of combat oriented military SF isn't futuristic enough, and it actually distracts me, because I feel like I'm seeing a rehash of the Gulf War or Vietnam.
 
Observations About Mecha Anime
For non-anime fans out there I'm just going to say that anime / manga is a big genre that ranges from mysteries, romance, historicals, all the way to SF.  It isn't just for kids and teenagers, but much of it is oriented at the youth market.  In Japan, it is huge, and the closest thing to it in North America is the young adult fiction genre that sells really well right now too.  Often the stories are simpler, but they have appeal, and are not over encumbered with a ton of story baggage.  There is plenty of good anime science fiction and in fact, the Japanese are often better at futuristic depictions than our own television and movie industries (although this maybe changing with the current generation of shows and movies).  As for mecha anime, this is a fairly popular sub-genre, and it has mainstream support in Japan, but not worldwide.

Mecha anime flavours.
  1. Big robots / giant mecha.  You've all heard about this trope that is comprised of the Iron Giant, Mazinger, Pacific Rim, Neon Genesis Evangelion, Getter Robo, Gunbuster, etc.  This is the super robot category where the pilots tend to be hot blooded, call out their robot's signature attacks like a Hong Kong action flick, and the robots are super-awesome with amazing powers and abilities.  Who wouldn't want to drive a giant robot?
  2. Real robot.  This is the more realistic type of robot that is not usually at large as the giant robot, but still big, and they behave more like real machines.  Macross, Gunparade, Full Metal Panic, Gundam all fall in this category.  Still about the robots, but with a wider range of stories.
  3. Futuristic anime with  robots.  This is often just science fiction anime.  This is the future where man and machine work together and it could be more like a technothriller.  Shows like Ghost in the Shell, Gundam 00 (this one is a real robot, but the story begged to be in this category), Patlabor, Bubblegum Crisis, Votoms, Burst Angel, Yukikaze (coming soon with Tom Cruise), Appleseed, etc.
There are quite a few mecha anime being produced right now after a bit of drought and I favour categories 2 and 3 again.  I like robots (even if they are taking away all of the repetitive jobs) and think we're going to have to live with them one way or another.  Humanoid robots are fragile by nature with high mobility, but they have too many weak spots like limbs, joints, heads.  If humanoid robots are to exist, they need to be cost effective so $50,000 anti-tank missile doesn't take down a $100,000,000 robot - something that we can't realize with near future technology.  I'm a realist when it comes to war, but I still like giant robots, so I needed to address these issues in my writing for Exocrisis Blue.  You can't really dodge laser blasts, but wouldn't it be fun to do so!

Some additional reading about Anime SF / Mecha Anime:
Conclusion
Now that I have discussed the two types of genres that I'm writing under you can see that there is commonality in the 3rd category between mecha anime and military SF where the stories tend to be broader and can appeal to a wider audience.  I don't think there is a great deal of crossover in audiences though.  You tend to be in one camp and never see the other as far as I can tell - maybe not enough press or something.  This is the same idea as serious literature folk not reading SF, but with less of a gulf.  However, these sub-genres tend to have avid fans too, so I don't think there is a great deal of general support for something outside type of story you like based on what I've read or seen.  I'm hoping my stories appeal to a wide fan base myself as I've enjoyed both types of genres and hopefully I've shed a bit of light on this subject so others do too if they do not already do so.

Resources for Military SF


 

Exocrisis Blue: Neo-Ace Chapter Four Now Up at Wattpad.

Neo-Ace is set in my Exocrisis Blue universe which takes place on an Earth that has settled into an uneasy truce with alien invaders who have carved out their territories. This is near future SF with a mecha robot element that has been well received.  Other works in the series are HARM and Raid on Kahamba available at Amazon.

Chapter four of Neo-Ace is now up over at Wattpad.  The senior mecha instructor learns more about the secret research program that the cadets are involved in.  They are good, but why will they be the best of the best for mecha pilots?  Plenty of background material and what is the PRECOG system?

http://www.wattpad.com/17633319-neo-ace-academy-an-exocrisis-blue-story-neo-ace

Monday, 20 May 2013

Raid on Kahamba Free For A Limited Time At Amazon.com

Raid on Kahamba is no longer free at the end of May 24, 2013.  I've used up my KDP free days.  Thanks to everyone who participated in the downloads.

Raid on Kahamba is my novella length followup to HARM which introduced my battlefield mechas.  These stories are set in a future which has humanity sharing the world with the alien Blue Newts.  The Blue Newts invaded the Earth and basically reshaped the global political structure after they carved out their territories.  Raid on Kahamba is a fast paced story about a team of commandos backed up by mechas racing to retrieve an alien artifact.

http://www.amazon.com/Raid-on-Kahamba-ebook/dp/B009BTMMC0

I haven't promoted Raid on Kahamba as much as HARM, but it is available free right now as I'm using up a number of my promo days due to it being enrolled in the Amazon KDP program.  If you enjoy it, also check out HARM, and I'm serializing the draft of Exocrisis Blue: Neo-Ace at Wattpad too.


 


Exocrisis Blue: Neo-Ace Chapter Three Now Up at Wattpad.

Just posted chapter three of Neo-Ace.  In this chapter, the mecha cadets get the old after action briefing.  It was interesting to write this scene as you have to imagine yourself as a senior instructor and a teenage cadet at the same time.  Wasn't too bad though.  In the previous chapter I had the HARM mechas go into a good fight against the alien Spidermechs and their Hunter mechs.  There was plenty of action to go around in that chapter.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/5716078-neo-ace-academy-an-exocrisis-blue-story


Wednesday, 15 May 2013

Serializing Draft Chapters For Exocrisis Blue: Neo-Ace At Wattpad

It has taken longer than I wanted to get the next installment of Exocrisis Blue: Neo-Ace out the door. I figure I'm about halfway done for this short novel, with another to follow after this.  I'll be probably writing a short story to fill in between HARM and Raid on Kahamba and releasing the three stories as a new ebook on Amazon this summer.  So as an interim step for Neo-Ace I'm going to serialize the chapters as I go in draft form.  This way you'll know I'm actually working on it and not slacking off.  The final revised version will only be on Amazon.  Who knows, maybe I'll even build some buzz for it on Wattpad.

Neo-Ace is available at this link on Wattpad.  New installment weekly.
http://www.wattpad.com/17096771-neo-ace-academy-an-exocrisis-blue-story-neo-ace